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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Great story, sad to see it end but I understand why this story ended.

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Thanks tchizek
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [25 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Genuka
Awe inspiring story. You had to juggle so much and integrate so many universes and backgrounds with very little tweaking. *bows in respect to master story teller*
I look forward to anything else in this series that you write.
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Thanks Genuka
Review By [Genuka] • Date [24 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from SnowyMountain
Sorry to hear that this series is ending. But it does seem like a decent stopping point and I can understand that it was starting to get a trifle bit complex juggling all of the different plotlines.

I am hoping that you will be continuing this series though. There seems to be an awful lot of interesting characters, plots, and ideas that you have and I would hate to just see them sit in limbo. Thanks for an intriguing and always amusing series.
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Thanks SnowyMountain
Review By [SnowyMountain] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "On that fateful night..." from annararen
Too many characters are introduced too fast from too many shows; it gets confusing, especially for those of us who aren't familiar with all universes involved.
Comments from author:
Sorry that you didn't like this story.

However, inducing confusion to the reader was part of my objectives for chapters 1-5. This is, after all, a period of Chaos.
Review By [annararen] • Date [23 Apr 13] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from AlphaBeta
NNNNOOOOOO!!!!! Please don't stop! Please contine this in some way! If you have to do 2 stories, one in space and the other on earth, then do it. If I have to choose for one of the ones in space, do it one one of the ships, with glimes on what going on with the rest of the fleet of course. The one with Faith, with some going on at the SGC and the world at large. Anyways, will be looking forward to your next instalment.

Edit: Go to hear where you might plan on taking the story. Hope to see the first chapter soon, of eithor of them!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review AlphaBeta.

Splitting the story is effectively what I will do. One of the ideas I like the most is to center on either the Whitestar (Willow's ship) or the Thuata dé Danann as they patrol away from the fleet.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Difdi
> I have no other choice than to resign my commission, Sir, based on the fact I am not human anymore.”

That's an odd reason to resign. Loyalty to another nation would be a good reason, so would fear of being targeted by the NID. Not being human on the other hand, by itself, would seem to be a silly reason to do so.

Nowhere in the U.S. Constitution or the Uniform Code of Military Justice does it require someone to be human to be a citizen or to have rights. Gender is mentioned, so is age, so is citizenship. Some things are disallowed, in that the government is prohibited from discriminating based on certain things.

But nowhere is there anything that would disqualify a nonhuman from being a commissioned officer.
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Thanks Difdi,

Using the text as written, you are perfectly right. The problem of the Muvians (and from Sam by extension) is that they fear how some people, people with political leverage, will interpret some things.

What they fear is that those people will force a ruling saying that all pre-contact texts are implied to only apply to humans, as they were the only sentients recognized at the time.

In short, Sam thinks that people like Kinsey will say that as a non-human, she has no rights. Maybourne would also point quite happily that she can be compromised by Echidna at any time and needs to be put 'in observation'. Her uniqueness just makes her too valuable.

So in the end, the 'different species' is rather a question of which danger this status create for her rather than a legal inability to be an officer based on this fact.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Xovervore
Thank you for the journey you have taken us on. Sad to see it end, but understandable, and at least there is hope for more.
When you had the bit about a cure for AIDS, I had an image of the POTUS doing his speech revealing the existence of the stargate, and posters near/on his podium that had items of interest such as the cure for AIDS, so those things would be in the viewers' minds as well as the new shocking knowledge of the existence of the stargate.
Anyone who likes this idea is welcome to use it.
Comments from author:
Thanks Xovervore,

I will remember this. Given who I chose as POTUS for this story, it would work very well.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [22 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Bobboky
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Review By [Bobboky] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from cjcold
Hate to see it end, but it was a nice run.

It is a nice stopping point and I really hope to see more of this universe in the future. It has a lot of potential stories that deserve to be told.

Really enjoyed the call from O'neill to the SGC, I had not thought of the issue of them abadoning Caerlon. Though I guess I assumed they would take the gate with them.

About the only thing I think is missing is a view from some of the Muvian people over once more being on the move through the endless dark of space.

More soon please.
Comments from author:
Thanks cjcold,

Though I never mentioned it, I established that taking a functioning Stargate through folded space is a bad idea, the "bag of holding in a portable hole" kind (or what Sheridan did by opening a jump gate inside another one to destroy a Shadow mothership).

The gate they had was the one from the Dead Planet, which was inert until they reached Caerleon and repaired it.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Aenea
A good place to end for now, my suggestion would be to flip through the SG1 episode guides for the future and decide how you would integrate your Universe into the plot. Episodes that take place on Earth move in the Cobra girls, ones that take place in the War with the Goa'uld use Tessa or Willow as the main focus, keep the Avengers back as the Universe expanding squad, ie when adding original plot to the Ahriman sections. The Avengers act as potential plot destroyers for regular episodes so it's best to keep them focused on Ahriman or the Ori.

You handle time-skips very well so cherry picking future episodes is open to you.

ps: Will there be a fallout episode for the Stars Reborn Redux? The cliffhanger of the other organizations responses is, well, leaving me needing my fix of good fiction. :-D
Comments from author:
Thanks, Aenea

I have many possibilities but centering on one of Danann or the Whitestar would allow for a more 'regular' SG-1 crossover.

As you pointed, characters from Tenchi Muyo (the OAV, Tenchi Universe is more reasonable) are so overpowered there is little that can go against them. The Special Forces/Avengers members I could see myself using more are the ones from Battle Angel Alita.

ps: yes, working on it.
Review By [Aenea] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Destrark
one of the best fics I've read, congratz about it, the epilogue is a good 'season 1' finisher and if you do make a sequel ( Please Do!) could you focus on Sam, the dragon sub-plot is really interesting, alternatively more focus on the summers family would be awesome, especially as merlin is now the step-dad...
Comments from author:
Thanks Destrark,

Possibilities, possibilities. I have some ideas for Sam that would also include developing some of the things I hinted about Cimmeria (which may or may not contain an island called Berk).
Review By [Destrark] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Panaka
Nice update and as good a point to "end the season" as any. Sorry to see it end, as it really is one of my favorite fics, but I understand the reason. You really do have a huge number of plothooks out there that need attention in any sequels. I did warn you a few times about that.
I hope people take you up on your offer, although they may have problems without a guide of where you want the story to go.

I will be looking forward to any sequels for this story and updates on your other stories (specificly the Sailor Moon/Buffy one, another favorite).
Comments from author:
Thanks Panaka,

Indeed you did warn me and I really appreciated your reviews. I wouldn't have rewritten the battle of Caerleon without you telling me how disappointed you were by my first shot.

As for my offer, wait and see.

And now for something completely different... let's get back to my other fics for the time being.
Review By [Panaka] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Vianca
You started it way before the challenge was made, but I believe this story does qualify for the "Ship of the Line" challenge.
Comments from author:
Thanks Vianca,

I remember wondering about it but finally thought that this story fails at the 'none of the usual crew' requirement (though it may be argued) as Key Yuki, Mimay and Tochiro are aboard the Arcadia.

I have an idea for a one-shot for this challenge. If I'm inspired, I'll write it soon.
Review By [Vianca] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Morgomir
Sad to see it end. It was a magnificent piece. I wish you the best of luck in your future undertakings.
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Thanks Morgomir
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from RoyalTwinFangs
Was good so far it went.
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Thanks RoyalTwinFangs
Review By [RoyalTwinFangs] • Date [21 Apr 13] • Not Rated
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