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Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from AnimeRonin
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Read Pratchett and you'll find the smallest (and oldest) Barbarians in existence, but Barbarian works well for Buffy.

Good enough so far, though I'm sorta worried where this'll go.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Robby
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Interesting, very interesting. Can't wait to see what changes next!
Review By [Robby] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from valdimarian
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I think Assassin fits Buffy better than Amazon, but Barbarian fits better than either.

As for Cordy, yea, Bow Amazon works.
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from travellerptp
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I never played that mod, but how about a thief for Cordelia? Even if it's not a real class, you can make it one. It's just never talked about :p

Nice story start, btw
Review By [travellerptp] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Fyrloche
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You forgot Giles as a Necro, unless he is going to be their version of Deckard Cain. Good start. Check out the classes for Diablo 3, they kick ass.
Review By [Fyrloche] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Prometeus
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If you go with the Titan Quest system you'll either have to rewrite chapter 2 or explain the switch. Honestly, I think it'd only start getting obnoxious if giant spiders drop rubies or something.
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*snort* You had to put it that way, didn't you?
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from cmdruhura
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Cordy as an Amazon is good, they're regal enough for Queen C. Therefore, Buffy should be an assassin, not a barbarian. She would benefit more from the stealth aspect than the brash attack and make her more effective which is the desired effect.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Prometeus
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Xander finding cash and weapons off dusted unarmed enemies is the most ridiculous and most awesome thing that could happen. Mind you, it's not impossibly ridiculous, just in your face ridiculous. Even Xander is going WTF?! :D

Is Buffy going to be tempted by the prospect of new shoes into subduing enemies and leaving them for Xander to kill?

I don't really get why the other scoobies have to become diablo character classes.
Comments from author:
Well, he hasn't actually seen anything drop off vamps, so a freakout is to be expected :D
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from BrinLondofive
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Well, since in Diablo 3 you can play either the original Barbarian or a younger female barbarian, having Buffy as a barbarian would not be out of the question. Yes, I know this is a D2 crossover, but I'm just pointing out it wouldn't be against Sanctuary's canon for a female barbarian.
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It is not as much canon issue than it is a mental imagery one. I mean, can you imagine Buffy using warcries?
Review By [BrinLondofive] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Gantithoren
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Giles as Deckard Cain might work, but I was thinking more along the lines of a Necromancer. Dark past, aligned with the light, but unafraid to call them on it when they're doing something stupid.
Review By [Gantithoren] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [7 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Dusel
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At first I face-palmed, I kid you not, when I read about the axe and the mone thing. Seriously...mixing game mechanics with fan fiction does not work out well when you're writing about an rpg. Anyway...Buffy would do good as a Barbarian, tight skimpy leather and tribal tatoos...whoa brother. Cordy probably should be an Amazon, if she can learn to fight. If you use Kendra or Faith they are both better suited as assassins IMO. You really need to explain the item drops better then just that they drop from monsters...or you could lampshade it. And the level up thing, you need better explenations or lampshading.
Comments from author:
Tight skimpy leather would me more Faith's style, not Buffy's lol.

About the item drop system, perhaps you aren't wrong. While the part in this chapter stands as it is, from this pont onwards, the Titan Quest system, where the monsters only drop the stuff they are using, would work better, especially when mixed up with the monsters that will be crossing over.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from kirkpatrick
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Her howl needs to sound like thay high pitched squeal only teenage girls can make.
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I have this picture in my mind where Buffy uses Howl and the vamps run for the hills :)
Review By [kirkpatrick] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Rating [5 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from evelyna
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Hm, I only know Diablo II, but I hope that won't make too much of a difference. I think Buffy should be a Barbarian, not only for the laughs, but also because you can't really make anyone else one.
As for Cordelia... While an Amazon with bow might suit her, I think you should make her something like Akara or Charsi. You know, give her the gift of repairing and creating Weapons and Armour, or maybe she could create Jewelry from the Gold and Gems that the others find - and of course, being paid for her work (they all would be, right, what with the "Blessed Ones" finding Stuff), she'd be independantly wealthy when her parents start having problems with the IRA (don't know when that is). Also, Giles could easily be cast as Deckart Cain. It would really only be an extention of what he is already doing - identifying stuff and giving information.
Review By [evelyna] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "It all began with an Archangel..." from Mordre
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For Cordelia I am thinking back to Diablo, (the first game) and the female rogues.
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Now there's a thought :)) although it would be a bit tricky to make it right with the ES items
Review By [Mordre] • Date [16 Dec 10] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Robby
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Interesting story idea! Looking forward to more!!!
Review By [Robby] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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