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It all began with an Archangel...

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting.Will be looking for the next chapter.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [14 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from duckman
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Love the idea behind this story as i have never seen it done before. Can't wait to see what happens next
Review By [duckman] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kayron
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I really liked the film Dogma! I enjoy when stories use Alanis Morrisette (as God), The Metatron (Voice of God), and other characters from the movie as heavenly hosts. The use of these characters almost always guarantee at least a little humor in the stories! I'm guessing that Xander is going to be getting some heavenly powers. That ought to be a major boost against evil.
Review By [kayron] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bobboky
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nice
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JoshuaRichardson
Review:
Neat. Has potential and hopefully will be continued.
Review By [JoshuaRichardson] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Raider
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this has potential.

hope to see more.
Review By [Raider] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lordamnesia
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This story has massive amounts of potential. You could do anything with the empowerment, from just basic body mods, to turning him into a Paladin from Diablo II, to doing something like Angel from the X-Men, well anything really. Keep up the fantastic work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Prometeus
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This is awesome but please fix the grammar errors.

The one thing that looks like a grammar mistake but isn't is "I am Archangel Tyrael."
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Ramenth
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Well, the Buffyverse is fucked. Once Heaven has access to a world, so does Hell, and without the World Stone significantly decreasing their powers any of the major Demons would make the Old Ones look like a Fallen. Not that Heaven is much better.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter.


Can you please let Xander keep the portal making ability but have him limit himself to only in emergencies and if not that, then atleast the flight powers and that ability that the Archangel had that allowed him to "his extended senses providing him with an explanation moments later.", "With a gentle touch of one of the tendrils of his wings, Tyrael knocked the girl unconscious,", "The Archangel linked their minds for a brief moment", "Two small demons came running into them, and Tyrael used the light tendrils that served as his wings to toss them away.", and maybe this one, atleast if someone is unconcious that is "As he did so, he formed a projection of his power to keep the spirit’s living body from being attacked during the night.". The least you could do is give him some ability to perform magic and maybe this ability the Archangel show; "At this proximity, he could see the workings of the spell, and understood the madness and the folly of it." Maybe on technology too, if he concentrated enough. *infinite puppy dog eyes*
Comments from author:
All in due time
Review By [Doodle] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from oldgirllost
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I liked it and would like more of it-- the summary suggested there would be more but there is a "complete" tag on it??? Will there be more???

(Yeah--I really liked it!)
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from princeaj
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good stuff
Review By [princeaj] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Dusel
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A suggestion, don't go extra-terestrial, keep it Earthbound and under-terestrial it'd make a better story - A Half-Archangel with a sword like Azurewrath? Game changer. Scratch that I just google'd it that is one fucking powerful sword!
Review By [Dusel] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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