I really liked the film Dogma! I enjoy when stories use Alanis Morrisette (as God), The Metatron (Voice of God), and other characters from the movie as heavenly hosts. The use of these characters almost always guarantee at least a little humor in the stories! I'm guessing that Xander is going to be getting some heavenly powers. That ought to be a major boost against evil.
Review By [kayron] • Date [12 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
This story has massive amounts of potential. You could do anything with the empowerment, from just basic body mods, to turning him into a Paladin from Diablo II, to doing something like Angel from the X-Men, well anything really. Keep up the fantastic work!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Well, the Buffyverse is fucked. Once Heaven has access to a world, so does Hell, and without the World Stone significantly decreasing their powers any of the major Demons would make the Old Ones look like a Fallen. Not that Heaven is much better.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Can you please let Xander keep the portal making ability but have him limit himself to only in emergencies and if not that, then atleast the flight powers and that ability that the Archangel had that allowed him to "his extended senses providing him with an explanation moments later.", "With a gentle touch of one of the tendrils of his wings, Tyrael knocked the girl unconscious,", "The Archangel linked their minds for a brief moment", "Two small demons came running into them, and Tyrael used the light tendrils that served as his wings to toss them away.", and maybe this one, atleast if someone is unconcious that is "As he did so, he formed a projection of his power to keep the spirit’s living body from being attacked during the night.". The least you could do is give him some ability to perform magic and maybe this ability the Archangel show; "At this proximity, he could see the workings of the spell, and understood the madness and the folly of it." Maybe on technology too, if he concentrated enough. *infinite puppy dog eyes*
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Review By [Doodle] • Date [11 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
A suggestion, don't go extra-terestrial, keep it Earthbound and under-terestrial it'd make a better story - A Half-Archangel with a sword like Azurewrath? Game changer. Scratch that I just google'd it that is one fucking powerful sword!
