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Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from Gideon
Review:
sweeteness! except for Hank, he was kinda creepy.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [23 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from wildone
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Can you go throw rocks at Canada or something?”

Pietro looked up at her in surprise. “Canada?”

“It's not like they'll fight back,” Dawn shrugged. “Unless you wanted to throw them at France, you might end up with a prize for that one.”

This made me laugh my but off
More plewse MORE
Review By [wildone] • Date [21 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
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I like that we got to see Dawn & Steve from the other characters eyes.
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [19 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from AriaDragoncrest
Review:
Excellent
Review By [AriaDragoncrest] • Date [18 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from SamDragon
Review:
:)
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from RevDorothyL
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Adorable!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [18 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from eriktheviking
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A well written home scene.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from Nightscream
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Oh this has to be the cutest chapter yet. His team is checking her out for him and giving approval! sooo sweet.

Thanks for updating this fic, i really do enjoy it.
Review By [Nightscream] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from deathgeonous
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Very cute fic. I like. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from joshlamont
Review:
Okay, this- this is adorable.
Review By [joshlamont] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snickerdoodle (the second day)" from LFW
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True, breakfast is better at home, except this Mom and Pop place makes French Toast lots better than mine and this all-you-can-eat place has all the hashbrowns and more than I can eat.

Great chapter too. I like how you had different POVs on different actions that set the scene. Nice

Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oatmeal" from Gideon
Review:
Go Dawn - you Tell that Fury! "My country" indeed!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Oatmeal" from SamDragon
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And what disaster will happen in that week.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oatmeal" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written Dawn with attitude.
Comments from author:
Your review reminds me of Power Rangers, lol!

"Five teenagers with attitude"

Thanks for the review though, it made me giggle and feel good.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Oatmeal" from prehensileclaw
Review:
I love it. This is a great feel good piece with the potential to be a top notch romance.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [15 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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