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Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from Valkyrie
Review:
I'm still reading.
Comments from author:
I appreciate your loyalty, thanks.

-J
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Great update. Hope you will be able to update sooner next time!
Comments from author:
I hope so too as well, here's to hoping!

-J
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 13" from eriktheviking
Review:
An interesting and insightful crossover.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed the piece thus far, as I'm sure it's not to everyone's cup of tea.

-J
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Interesting,please update!
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from justapiranha
Review:
Just asking if your still into this fic? are you going to update it? or abandon it?
Comments from author:
I thought I made a note of it earlier, but I guess I didn't; anyway, I've just been quite busy with Junior year, so I had to make a few sacrifices, one of them being the amount I've allocated to writing.

That said, with my last MCB final on Wednesday, I should be able to start writing again within the next week or so. Apologies for the lack of information.

-J
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from theinveigler
Review:
Oooh, I like this story a lot. Buffy and Naruto are so funny and cute together.
Review By [theinveigler] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from fran
Review:
I Like, I Lust, I Love!!Please Update Soon!!
Review By [fran] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Gideon
Review:
Quite a range of characters in this village!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from kittenpoker
Review:
Gai and Kakashi and Kurenai (Oh My!)...love it! I'm curious where you're going with the 'beast' and the comments about Buffy's slayer nature- and the comment about sealing! Can't wait to see what's next. And good luck with classes (you lucky person you, I had to start monday) :)
Comments from author:
Kittenpoker,

When I first signed up, I thought I had Mondays free, since my schedule printed off the week with nothing on the 17th - then I learn that it was Martin Luther King Jr.'s birthday. I'm dumb.

And thanks for liking the chapter, always nice to hear.

-Jay
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from Laienth
Review:
Well, even if I'm a bit impatient to read about this 'sealing' thing, this little wandering chapter was worth it. I like how you managed to make Gai and Kakashi so much like in the anime! And I agree with Kurenai's statement. :p
Comments from author:
Laeienth,

It was basically done by watching and re-watching scenes with the two, both at their most insane. Both characters are capable of being serious, we all know that, but I doubt Buffy's going to see that aspect this quick in the game - what's the point of that when we all want the drama?

My only issue was Kurenai, since we don't see much of her at all. Anyway, thanks for word of confidence, always appreciated.

-Jay
Review By [Laienth] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from borgrabbit
Review:
Paradise lost haiku:

Pervert eyes billboard
Oh beautiful smutty smut
Frosty eyes—hard slap

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Interesting chapter!
Comments from author:
Borgrabbit,

Amusing Haiku again, much appreciated.

-Jay
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from LetsRandom
Review:
Loved the Gai segment. Personally felt the Kakashi thing was slightly OOC. I feel although he does enjoy the pervy book, he knows well enough to be discreet. Like he won't hide it, but he won't flaunt it either, just my opinion anyway. And a few typos that I thought you'd like to fix "the man certainly had a set of longs for an old timer" and "The boy obviously forgot about his supposed injury as she jumped to his feet". There might have been one or two earlier but I have forgotten them by the end. Great update looking forward to more, hope you update soon!
Comments from author:
LetsRandom,

It's actually a segment based on Episode 100 or 101, the matter about Kakashi, forgot to mention that.

EDITED: Took a look and revised based on your review, thanks for the heads up.

-Jay
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 12" from justapiranha
Review:
oh gash i just loved it, and it was so long too. it was great to wake up to an update. almost as good as finding Dr Pepper on sale for $0.33 (20 oz).
Comments from author:
Justapiranha,

Your review made my morning, it was just that amusing - I don't think many can say they've been compared to Dr. Pepper before.

-Jay
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from RogueAngel
Review:
i gotta say you made my day with this, Buffy/Anime are hard to fine especially good ones. Plus I love your writing style, you manage to tell so much without writing it all. Some people kill you with description, but not here :D. Are they going to get to see Buffy unleashed? I can almost see the pwnage. Will there be any Kakashi/Buffy in the future, coz I gotta say his my favourite character. Looking forward to the next chapter. Cya
Comments from author:
RogueAngel,

Thank you for the compliments and you just so happen to have asked on a particularly good day for me - I was able to finish my financial aids and loan applications ahead of time, things I've been neglecting - and the next chapter should be out in a few days.

It's going to have much more action, should anyway, proving to be quite a handful. And the thing regarding Kakashi, maybe, maybe not, it depends on how the characters react to each other when they "meet."

-Jay

EDITED 1/9/11: Grammatical issues
Review By [RogueAngel] • Date [9 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from Valkyrie
Review:
Cool. Now we have a bit of a back story. I assume that the villagers don't really know what to make of them, because Buffy didn't just quietly take the villagers's hate towards Naruto and Naruto was willing to stand up for the kid bullying him...

EDIT: By the time Pain invaded, yes, Naruto had earned acceptance. It started with his fighting of Zabuza and he was pretty much accepted by the time Sasuke defected.
Comments from author:
Valkyrie,

In the Manga, only ever gained acceptance during the Pein Arc, when the Village actually saw him perform his heroic acts - with Buffy here, he kind of has to step up. She doesn't roll over like he did.

-Jay

EDITED

EDIT2: I meant by the Villagers, it was only during the Pein Arc that he did anything that truly affected THEM directly. Everything else was pretty isolated.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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