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Review of chapter "Prologue" from AlphaBeta

Review:

You got my attention. The next chapter though better be WWWAAAAYYYYYY longer though.

Comments from author:

The brevity of the piece, it really does something. For me at least.

I'm debating with myself over how I want to proceed with this past the prologue - should I be writing longer scenes or continue in such a manner?

I'm most familiar with the Naruto-Verse, so what you're asking for isn't out of reach. It'll just be a bit more difficult and will take longer to produce.

Anyway, your input was most appreciated; makes an author feel that their work actually means something.

-Jay

Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from justapiranha

Review:

This reads as a oneshot, but please continue.

Comments from author:

I'll be updating every other day, if not everyday. Maybe. Probably.

Review By [justapiranha] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Prologue" from CrystalBlaze

Review:

Very nice.

If Buffy is immortal, this could be her.

And if it is, I expect that Konohagakure hasn't a clue what lies in store..

Comments from author:

Everybody's pretty much clueless to the Force-That-Is-Buffy.

-Jay

Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [18 Dec 10] • Not Rated

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