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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Bunney
Review:
Awesome! Still loving the Pike love :)

Later and Love
Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Discord
Review:
*squee* Thanks for the update! It's been a while. :)
Review By [Discord] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I love it. I do think a bit of flashback or reference to the final straw that led to this may be in order, for a sense of timeline.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SlowMercury
Review:
Very interesting series--there's a atmosphere of bleakness, and waiting, and pain. However, it does seem to be lightening up some in this latest chapter, which is a relief. It makes sense that Buffy would head straight for Pike; she's such a social animal, and he's pretty much the last person she trusted before Sunnydale. How did she find him, though? Because if she knew where he was all along and didn't let him know she was alive every now and then, that's kinda not cool.

Anyway, I'm glad to see Pike; I always liked him as a character and it would definitely make sense that he'd have become a SPN style hunter if the option was available. Is he the Pike from the movie, or the one from the comic book "Origins"? They seemed similar, but I sort of recall they had a few key differences...

Please keep up the good work!
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from kittenpoker
Review:
Has anyone told you this story just keeps getting better and better? Because it totally does. I love Pike's garage and the bar crew, and I hope Buffy stays with them at least a while longer!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [24 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from AwesomeGeek
Review:
Love the addition of Pike! He was a character I always wished Whedon would have brought on the show. Ok, maybe not the Luke Perry version but still.
More please! I'll just bug you on TR for it. LOL!
Review By [AwesomeGeek] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Bunney
Review:
Please say that Pike gets here a bad ass car?!?!?!

Bunney
Review By [Bunney] • Date [3 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Gideon
Review:
A good start, a fresh identity on order, a job to occupy her time and provide some cash and a friend she can trust. Like you said though then she needs to find something to do with herself. I can't see her just playing barkeep for long, could get boring. And I'm sure some kind of nasty thing will find her soon enough. Maybe she should get a gun to keep her cover intact when she kills it?
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from kerrykhat
Review:
I love this chapter, Jez, but that's really not a surprise. I like how you have Buffy taking charge of her life, and being responsible for what she's doing with it. I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Review By [kerrykhat] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from RocksandGlass
Review:
Still a great story. The Pike element is a nice touch.
Review By [RocksandGlass] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from nicjphill
Review:
Glad I found this! Wasn't expecting Pike but can see how he is going to introduce her to the hunter world. Looking forward to the next update!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Discord
Review:
Mmmmm Luke Perry! lol That was a total surprise. Will there be anything about how Pike and Buffy split? Can't wait to see where Buffy goes next.
Review By [Discord] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from celticjenn
Review:
Im really enjoying this new series and am looking forward to your next installment!
Review By [celticjenn] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Past Donor)akat
Review:
I love the new chapter, jez! Especially Pike's introduction. I can totally see him reacting to Buffy this way. I can't wait to see what comes next, and how you develop his character!

Oh, I loved the description of Murphy, too! I hope there's more of him in the story, too. :D
Review By [(Past Donor)akat] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nightshadowlife
Review:
Just read your series from start to now and its AWESOME!!!!! Can't wait to see the next chapter or story whichever goes next! :)
Review By [nightshadowlife] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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