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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Prometeus
Review:
'The Scourge of Europe' indeed.

I have to agree that Xander gone nuts was also my first guess though Angel made perfect sense too. Mind you, Angel makes even more sense as a fake-out for a dumb Buffy. And that's saying something cause the slow patient sadistic game is totally Angel's style.

This is a great fic and it is TOTALLY how it would have happened too. Stand up some big dumb targets um "heroes" and they'll just get their throats cut.

I disagree on the comment about depressing Teresa of Calcutta though. She was a really twisted sick sadomasochistic bitch who thought suffering was holy and she would get re-radiated holiness so long as she surrounded herself by suffering people to whom she denied painkillers. Because they had to feel pain you see in order to be "blessed". She also gave her blessings to Baby Doc Duvalier, the butcher of Haiti. She was one sick bitch and going by her record she would have been "uplifted" by all your depictions of Buffy-the-Saint's immense suffering.
Comments from author:
I just want to point out that everything you've learned in the first chapter is taken from Buffy's point of view and based on the information the Council possessed, so none of it is necessarily completely correct. Buffy simply assumed that 'Angelo DeNegri' was actually Angelus, but it could just as easily been someone looking to set Angel(us) up as a fall guy in order to cover themselves. ;-)

That's the fun part about having different solutions/resolutions with each subsequent chapter - I can cover *every* possible ending and not have to choose just one. ;-)
Review By [Prometeus] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CPTSkip
Review:
Lol! I liked Buffy's niece. I could see a lot of Anya in her socialization skills. Lol! And hopefully, if Buffy remembers everything, Anya won't die now. Win! I really look forward to more of these interesting alternate story endings.

About the last line, I really, really hope it doesn't mean Liam, I mean Angel, is the father of another uber-kid. He sure screwed his first son's life up the first time. Lol!
Comments from author:
Yep, Joyce Hallie was *definitely* Anya's daughter. ;-)

And that last line was just to play with people's minds. ;-)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CPTSkip
Review:
OK, I guess that was the "happy ending" where the protagonist wakes up and "it was all a dream" AU. Considering how dark the first chapter was, I think I am dreading the next few alternate endings of your story. You certainly can write stories that would have even depressed Mother Teresa. Lol!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think. ;-)

And as I've indicated a few times before this, my head is sometimes not a nice place to live in, at all. ;-(

The next chapter should be up soon.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TroyGuffey
Review:
Even as much as "It was all a dream" is a happy ending, it's probably the worst.

Up until the final note, I was expecting maybe The First was orchestrating things, until I saw the nom de plume.

Wood should have been packing his own gun! (Streetsweper?)

What happened to Illyria?
Comments from author:
Not to worry, I've got a LOT of other ideas for possible explanations for the first chapter, and you're probably going to think most of them are nuts, too. ;-)

And in this slice of the multiverse, Illyria thought that wasting her time with scum like the Council was unacceptable, and went wandering off on her own.
Review By [TroyGuffey] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Sandi
Review:
Good idea. Of course since there are no bodies for Xander or Dawn they could still be alive and trying to stop this or or be behind it.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

And as far as your suggestions are concerned, that's crazy talk, 'cause I would NEVER, EVER consider writing something like that!

Yeah.

Really.

I wouldn't do something that.

Ever.

Really.

;-)
Review By [Sandi] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Cutiepie
Review:
Yikes! What brought this one on? That second chapter was probably the furthest "resolution" from my mind. I had considered Vic (gone crazy-er after Dawn was killed, or maybe he was brainwashed, or whatever), possibly Xander gone nuts-o (although I can't really see him going after Giles, and I don't know how he would have managed to duplicate his own eye for a fake-out), and of course Angelus. I don't think I would have ever thought of Buffy hallucinating again. It will be interesting to see what other alternatives you have come up with for this. You are certainly one of my favorite, extremely inventive, authors.
Comments from author:
Well, if you think that the second chapter's resolution was crazy, wait until you see what else I've got planned., ;-)

Thanks for reviewing. ;-)
Review By [Cutiepie] • Date [20 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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