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Review of chapter "The Corps" from (Past Donor)ScottWanderer
Review:
This is so Xander though. If the ones I love die becuase you were to stubborn to help, then I will kill you.

As for bester, I resent comparing him to Travers. Bester was not at all afriad to get his hands dirty. Sure he'd use a tool when he could, but if he needed to act he did it quickly and efficiently.

As for his standing he is the ultimate sympathetic villian. He only is doing what is best for his people as he has been taught. He doesn't want personal power. He isn't enjoying misery for it's own sake, and he'd gladdly do anything for anyone as long as it helps his people.
Comments from author:
Or Screws over Mr. Garibaldi... but i think that is just for shits and giggles more than outright villainy...

Very good points and I'm glad you enjoyed the little ficlet.

-Tjin
Review By [(Past Donor)ScottWanderer] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Corps" from Omegaprime
Review:
Now this Xander IS scary.

But how did he get to that time period? Spell or something else?

Keep up the good work.

Edit: Ah yes, the old cryo-stasis plot probably.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you liked it, but it is about the same as him warning Buffy that he would kill her if Willow was hurt.... he just has a LOT more riding on his shoulders now.

as for how he got there... let's go with 'Other' ;oP

Glad you enjoyed.

**Reply to Reply**

That is one 'Other' option... of course there are so many to choose from.

-Tjin
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from JediKnight
Review:
Not exactly what I expected from a chapter labeled "Snake Eyes", why stop here though?

-Edit: I was thinking either "Stargate: SG-1" or "G.I. Joe".
Comments from author:
yeah, but i couldn't work dice into the story... or where you talking G.I. Joe?

-Tjin
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Corps" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I have to say, Bester was such a Traversian prick it would take a Harris to keep a lid on him...

**after the reply**

I like Alfred Bester as well. BECAUSE he out-Travers Travers and makes it look easy.

Resorting to TV Tropes (which has a great website), one can say and should note on the appropriate page that he demonstrates the magnificence of the Magnificent Bastard.
Comments from author:
I actually LIKED Bester, he was such a great... what ever... it's hard to actually call him a villain but...

**Reply to reply**

I would actually put Bester in the Richard Wilkens category of villains... without the personal objective... he is good at his job, well respected by those he works with, open, easy going and honest with a sense of humor... and more than willing to rip someones heart out and force feed it to them if it will help him achieve his goals.

-Tjin
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [19 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Corps" from eriktheviking
Review:
Sheer brilliance!
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed.

-Tjin
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Corps" from Hanzo
Review:
LOL
Comments from author:
Thanks.

-Tjin
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "On the second day of Christmas…" from ShyBob
Review:
I liked the Thunderer chapter best!
Comments from author:
Thanks, that was a bit of a Fic that just wouldn't leave me alone.

-Tjin
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Corps" from AnimeRonin
Review:
The last great act of defiance...
Comments from author:
Sometimes it is alright to lose, so long as you make sure the other guy doesn't 'Win'

-Tjin
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Corps" from Bobboky
Review:
nice
Comments from author:
Thanks.

-Tjin
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Corps" from cathyoden
Review:
Really scary. I would like to see this explored. Xander's ruthless desperation vs Xander' possessive loyalty and all under psycorp? SCARY stuff.
Comments from author:
The really scary question would be... is 'He' under Psycorp... or is 'Psycorp' Under Him?

-Tjin
Review By [cathyoden] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Corps" from Creamy
Review:
*flails* Freaking awesome :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [Creamy] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Corps" from (Past Donor)kruen
Review:
Very interesting. I wouldn't mind seeing this fleshed out.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

-Tjin
Review By [(Past Donor)kruen] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Corps" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
I like it. If turned into a fic it would have to explain the lack of Slayers and the Telepath personnel that now run the Watchers council.
Xander being a telepath is an easy one to explain, blame the hellmouth for muting his talent enough for him to have been "The one who sees" instead of "the one who reads minds".

I guess the no slayers (at least none that i've seen in this bit) could be explained as they at a certain point became unnecessary having defeated demonkind.

I'm just wondering how you'd explain Xander still being alive and well at that time.
Comments from author:
Sounds like you have a plan... run with it, you know i'll read it.

-Tjin
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from Omegaprime
Review:
Yikes.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I will try.

-Tjin
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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