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Review of chapter "The Corps" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
I like it. If turned into a fic it would have to explain the lack of Slayers and the Telepath personnel that now run the Watchers council.
Xander being a telepath is an easy one to explain, blame the hellmouth for muting his talent enough for him to have been "The one who sees" instead of "the one who reads minds".

I guess the no slayers (at least none that i've seen in this bit) could be explained as they at a certain point became unnecessary having defeated demonkind.

I'm just wondering how you'd explain Xander still being alive and well at that time.
Comments from author:
Sounds like you have a plan... run with it, you know i'll read it.

-Tjin
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [18 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from Omegaprime
Review:
Yikes.

Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I will try.

-Tjin
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from Bobboky
Review:
sweet
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well done alteration to the possession theme.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you like it.

-Tjin
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Snake Eyes" from Orchamus
Review:
This was something that if worked on, could be an interesting story.
Comments from author:
It could, but these are just Idea's at the moment.

-Tjin
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not a creature was stirring..." from CPTSkip
Review:
Wow! That last one was a heart breaker. Well done once again.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [13 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a creature was stirring..." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and interesting twist on both genres. I'm surprised nobody actually tried that in B5 after Sheridan's success.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Not a creature was stirring..." from deusexsububi
Review:
Ok, Xander in possession of nukes, my brain bluescreened at the sheer thought of it. Well used. All of these one shots are all really well done and straight to the point.
Review By [deusexsububi] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a creature was stirring..." from Bobboky
Review:
awesome
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a creature was stirring..." from AnimeRonin
Review:
At least he didn't 'ride it in' like Slim Pickens did or his last words were not 'yippie ki yay, mother-'. Nice one, though.
Review By [AnimeRonin] • Date [10 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "My kingdom..." from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice. We seldom see Amy in a Helloween story. Well done but I would love to read more of this story.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "My kingdom..." from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Edge and Calibur.. HOO boy. I always liked Zarasamel's (sp?) ending. Containing both, and trying to remake the world in a less awful way with all the time in the world to do it.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "My kingdom..." from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written moment at Halloween or just after.
Comments from author:
Just after, i considered giving him Soul Edge, but after Frostmourne i decided to be nice.

-Tjin
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [5 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coyote, Wolf, Hyena... what ever..." from xon
Review:
My next suggestion... because Xander's weapon of choice is an axe, I want to see him with Baraggan Luisenbarn's Arrogante.
Comments from author:
I gotta do something other than Bleach for the next chapter.
Review By [xon] • Date [31 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Coyote, Wolf, Hyena... what ever..." from xon
Review:
A little shorter than I would've liked, but I liked the way you went about it.

Plus, I'd like to see you expand on this idea one day...
Comments from author:
at the moment these are all one shots, i have no plan to continue any of them... but if your interested in writing an expansion yourself you are more than welcome.

-Tjin
Review By [xon] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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