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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Once again, a mixture of a good idea, mostly reasonable plot, and several issues that do damage to your fic.

I'm not sure that I've heard of a fic where Buffy takes the Divination post. Bravo.

Some factual/canon issues:

Anya died in the fight with the First.

Buffy's real name is Buffy Anne Summers, not Elizabeth - stated many times, including on her tombstone.

You have Buffy as a graduate of the Royal Phoenix Teaching Academy. Now, that could be a throwaway place, but your setup shows that you want it treated like a real place. Fine, but then, when did Buffy have the time to go there?

Why would the queen mother be granting knighthoods, and not the queen? Why would she be introduced as Miss Elizabeth Summers, when someone that knew her would (depending upon just how she was knighted) she would either be Sir or Dame Buffy Summers?

What did the American Ministry of Magic award her?

Giving a knight all of those rights that you did is part of your purview as a fanfic author, but it begs the question - why wasn't there another knight that was aware of the magical world, or why didn't they stop Riddle or Umbridge?

Anyway, hope to see more of this.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your review.

I started this fic a couple of years ago and I can't quite remember what I was thinking when I wrote what I already have. I just remember that what had started as a simple BTVS/HP fan fiction crossover suddenly went in its own direction and I had so many ideas at the time of where to go next that I had to take a break from it before I drove myself nuts trying to narrow down a direction for it to go. (This last sentence is just a sample of how twisted my mind became *smiles*).

The next couple of chapters will be focused on explaining just why Buffy is the way she is and introducing a whole set of other characters from other fandoms that just begged to join my story. In my mind anyway.

Thanks again.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Featherfoot
So, Buffy comes back with all these awesome (and "out there") credits to her name. She has also randomly dyed her hair multiple colors (which i don't understand why). And her new clothes (duster jacket thing) doesn't really fit my idea of Buffy's usual personality.
I think you're overdoing it. The Buffy in this fic is almost TOO awesome.

But this is just my opinion.

Great idea for a story though, it has potential :)
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

The back story is coming soon to explain the changes in Buffy. She isn't perfect by any means. I just wanted her to make an impact in the HP world. And as for the seeming personality change and new look, well this isn't actually Joss's Buffy but my own interpretation of her after she has gone through some things that the scoobies were unaware of. Plus I never said that her hair was actually dyed those colours now did I?

Thanks again.
Review By [Featherfoot] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
I liked that and I do hope you add more soon.
Comments from author:
Thank you.

I'm hopefully going to update next week. *Fingers crossed*
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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