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Review of chapter "The offer" from deathgeonous
Review:
Looks intersting. I want more. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The offer" from cmdruhura
Review:
FYI: Even though not pointed out in the movies, magic and demons do exist in the Marvel Universe (Dr. Stephan Strange, Sorcerer Supreme & Illyana Rasputin AKA Magik are two prime examples).

Otherwise not a bad start, though making Buffy immortal really isn't much of a reward in the long, long, long run.
Comments from author:
To be honest I had no idea whether they did exist or not in the marvel universe or not, I assumed they did, but I wrote it that way for sake of the story.

I agree, Buffy being immortal isn't a reward, I thought of it more as a 'price to pay' at first. But after I wrote out all the dialogue for it, it didn't feel right. So I re-worded it and am planning to continue the conversation in the next chapter.
Review By [cmdruhura] • Date [28 Dec 10] • Not Rated
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