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Review of chapter "Get Out of This Town" from Pointer
A thirteen to fourteen could be reasonably expected to be in at 11:00 PM.

Enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much. And yes, the curfew was reasonable, though she was too late to be taken to the Burrow.

Glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [Pointer] • Date [28 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Out of This Town" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
Very interesting. I'm looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [26 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Get Out of This Town" from MarcusSLazarus
Well, slight complication as far as Dawn getting back to the Burrow goes, but at least Harry should be able to straighten it out once she gets there...

Plus, of course, interesting touch with the additional explanation about Dawn's past; your reasoning regarding why the Weasleys looked after her early on makes perfect sense.

And as for the scenes revealing that Dumbledore and Snape are aware (to some extent, anyway) that SOMETHING has altered their memories...

Should be interesting to see how everyone reacts, anyway; Buffy might have coped fairly well with that news, but given Harry's own issues with people lying to him, coupled with the fact that he's less mature than Buffy was when she got this news, I have a feeling he's going to have a BIT more trouble accepting the idea that Dawn's still his sister even if she didn't exist until a few months ago than Buffy did...

Keep up the great work; can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much for the review! I really appreciate your constant input.

You certainly gave me a lot to think about, as I had not really considered that Harry is a good four years younger than Buffy when she received the news. Thanks for pointing that out.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [25 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Starts with Goodbye" from MarcusSLazarus
A bit ambiguous about why it was deemed 'safe' for DAWN to know about the Wizarding world early on when it wasn't believed to be safe for Harry to have the same knowledge- even if her staying with the Weasleys while Harry's away makes sense; if Dawn had to cope with the 'punishment' the Dursleys would have originally 'divided' between her AND Harry on her own she'd probably have had a breakdown at best-, but the idea of flashbacks introducing Dawn's past in this timeline is interesting, and the scene with Buffy being 'filled in' on the fate of the Key has DEFINITE potential for the future...

Keep up the great work!

(Just a minor suggestion, but any chance that you could include a couple of 'cross-series references' like a DADA Class where Snape discusses the Scourge of Europe, to add an extra bit of humour to Dawn's first meeting with the Scoobies when she learns that they work with 'Angelus' and 'William the Bloody'?)
Comments from author:
Thank you for reviewing so fast and so kindly!! It really means a lot!

I guess there are two ways to respond to the ambiguity. My intention is that Molly did not reveal anything about the magical world to Dawn, she just took the girls out for ice cream (presumably in a grounded Ford Anglia) as Dawn's godmother (and, similar to Ms. Figg, tried to act gruff and mean to the Dursley's face so they would allow her to come back). And after Harry is accepted to Hogwarts, she knows of the Wizarding World anyway. However, there is purposely some ambiguity because I'm fleshing things out next chapter. I'm very excited for what I have planned for the Scoobies as well.

Also, I like that suggestion, though I have a different shout out planned for another Scooby that will produce some humor as well. Thanks again!!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [11 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Can I Say" from DawnieWrites
Seems interesting so far; nice way to set up the story.

I hope to see more, it seems like it would turn out really well.
Comments from author:
Thank you so much!
Review By [DawnieWrites] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Can I Say" from (Recent Donor)DrakePendragon
I give a big stamp of approval. This is gonna be fun.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I am having a ton of fun writing, so hopefully reading is as much fun if not more!
Review By [(Recent Donor)DrakePendragon] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What Can I Say" from namegoeshere
Really, I think this is the best 'Dawn is Harry's sister' I've read so far. I can wait to read more, and want you to know what a GREAT job you are doing!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you! This made my day!
Review By [namegoeshere] • Date [30 Dec 10] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What Can I Say" from MarcusSLazarus
An intriguing start with some DEFINITE potential; I look forward to seeing how it's developed...

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed the beginning.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [29 Dec 10] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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