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Review of story "Finally Enough" from jormunguard
Review:
Interesting start, to what could be a good story. I am interested in seeing how you play out the pairing. I see from your note that you are going to change some of the things that the other reviewers commented on, which are some of the problems I had so I'm not going to give you another comment in regards to those.
I do see a slight problem with your reasoning for why she left though, it seems a little against her established character. I could understand her being stressed out and needing some time away from that life, but to have her pissed off over them wanting her to lead and not giving Faith a chance seems a little out of character. Especially since that's the reason that she got kicked out in season 7, because she wouldn't allow another to lead. I like that you have her seeing that she treated Faith wrong by not giving her a chance but it seems kinda off when she's complaining about the Scoobies doing exactly what she wanted them to do for so long.

A possible method to keep the same kind of idea would be to have it that they as a group decided to have Faith lead for awhile and let Buffy have a break from it. And then Buffy getting pissed because despite that decision they still kept turning to Buffy rather than Faith. It would keep the same general flavor while making it not look so bad for Buffy. The way you have it, it kinda puts Buffy in a bad light by making it look like yet again Buffy is running from a responsibility that she demanded. If you make the slight change that it was an agreement by the entire group to give Buffy the break and let Faith lead, then the Scoobies look bad because they're going back on the decision.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
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I'm glad to see you took the reviews to heart. You have a really good idea here and it looks your enthusiasm made you rush out of the gate so to speak.
I am anxiously awaiting your rewrite, I'm sure it will be great.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from Luhh
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I like the idea that you had for the story and the fact that is you are doing a Stargate Femslash fanfic, witch is rare. But i think you are, besides rushing into the story, over looking some things.
Buffy would never just trust in the military like thins and go work for them that easily, it would take time and effort for that to happen and she wouldn't just tell all her life to them out of the blue, it would happen gradually as she gets to know and trust SG-1.
Maybe you should let Buffy and Sam met outside of the SGC first, with both not knowing of each other. Make them connect as civilians first, it would be a big surprise when Buffy appear on SGC as this mysterious recruit from the president.
I know this is YOUR story, so this are just tips, just my opinion, really.
Take things slow, take your time and let the story flow on its on.
Oh, and don't call Buffy Elizabeth, please? Its not her name and the cool thing of the name Buffy are the teasing and she getting mad about it. =P

Well, good luck with the rest of the story, i will be here reading it =D
;*
Review By [Luhh] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
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I like where you're going with the story and the pace might be a bit quick but I'm hoping it slows once Buffy meets up with SG1. Almost everything had me interested until you came up with Buffy using the name Elizabeth. How can she do that when her legal name is Buffy Anne Summers?
Do you have a logical explanation and will you share it?
Hope to see more soon.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [9 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from belgintei
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I think you are rushing this story - Buffy has left the gang, move half way across the country and met and explained her life as a slayer in three short parts!
Also I do not think she would explain Dawn's existence to strangers especially military - can you say NID/Trust disaster waiting to happen.
Review By [belgintei] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from Thedruid
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Fair story, but nothing really interesting about it, and you lost alot of believability with the grand house being provided to Buffy, and then her being so open to SGC, even telling them some very personal stuff.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [3 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from TwoBlackDragons
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“Bu - Elizabeth Summers, I’m supposed to meet Major General Hammond,” Buffy said using her real name, deciding to go by that from now on. ‘Buffy is in the past, for this new life Elizabeth is what I’ll go by.’


Buffy is her real name. Elizabeth is fanon not canon.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Buffy_the_Vampire_Slayer_%28TV_series%29#Main_characters
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [22 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from HunterH
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I love where your going with this story can't wait to read More!
Review By [HunterH] • Date [18 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from darkplayer
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Very interesting story plot. I look forward to seeing how it develops from here. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from TwoBlackDragons
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About the "don't ask don't tell" policy, you could always make this AU pretend congress grew a pair and abolished the no gays in the military 30 years ago. Or the Supreme Court actually upheld the Constitution and viewed everybody as equal before the law.
Review By [TwoBlackDragons] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from FireFlash
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An interesting beginning, if a little fast for my tastes. How the advertised pairing develops should be interesting as well, especially since Stargate is set in the years of the "don't ask don't tell" policy. I look forward to more soon. :)
Review By [FireFlash] • Date [17 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Finally Enough" from wiper
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Interesting start of story. Will be waiting for more...
Review By [wiper] • Date [14 Jan 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of chapter "Enough..." from aria
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I really like the start of your story, the idea and the way you write.
I also like this pairing which you do see as many time as I'd like.
I can't wait to read what happen next.
Review By [aria] • Date [7 Jan 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Enough..." from Ramenth
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Fantastic story. I really like the use of minimalist writing, it's not something you see often in fanfiction.
Review By [Ramenth] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Enough..." from griffindorgirl
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Where's the story? Just the disclaimer was posted.
Review By [griffindorgirl] • Date [6 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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