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Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
"He wondered how many of the bad things that happened to Dawn's sister were because of her Dawn herself…" That made me giggle because it is so very true and kinda astute of Sam to have already picked up on that. ;)

I like Dawn's nearly constant string of complaints about her sister, but as soon as Sam made a move to even just question Buffy's name she pounced on him like a little tiger in training. That felt very true to a sibling relationship and it was nicely underplayed. My only quibble is with Buffy's lack of cooking skills since it's been shown *several* times in the series that she can cook (IE Thanksgiving season 4), but aside from that this story shows great promise and I shall be tracking.
Comments from author:
LOL! "Pounced on him like a little tiger in training"! Love it!

Sorry about the cooking thing. I honestly couldn't recall any Buffy cooking incidences (all that kept popping in my head when I thought of cooking in the Buffyverse was Dawns bizarre creations). And I really liked the idea of Buffy trying to be Miss Domesticity and not being able too cook anything without it resulting in disaster. :-P

Thanks so much for checking out my story and taking the time to leave a review!
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
Oh Sam, you are in for a surprise. Loved this chapter. I liked the way you wrote Sam. This could have totally been on tv.
Comments from author:
lol! Yeah, poor Sam doesn't know what he's in for, does he? Really glad you liked this chapter too! Thanks again for taking the time to drop a review! :-D
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from periskyye
Review:
REALLY looking forward to the rest of this story. I love that last line!
Comments from author:
Yay! I'm so happy that you liked it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [periskyye] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from TurquoiseGirl
Review:
Lol, Dawn WOULD be the best kick ass lawyer! God, I couldn't stop snickering at Dawn's arguments.

"So your sister, the accident prone bounty hunter that can 'take care of herself', needs someone to watch out for her?"

I can't wait to see what you write next.
Comments from author:
It was a challenge trying to get Dawn's special brand of insanity/reasoning right. lol! I'm so glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [TurquoiseGirl] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clockworkorange
Review:
Good God, I love Buffy to pieces (and uber protective!Buffy more so) but...poor Dawn. Buffy barging into 'Dawnie's' class to bring her a sweater is a bit much (even though it's kinda sweet).

I'm curious as to how well Dawn's plan of using Sam as a distraction for Buffy will work. I doubt that Sam believes the whole 'cursed bounty hunter' thing but it would certainly make things interesting if he did. Eh, actually, things will probably be super interesting between Sam and Buffy regardless.

Also, I wonder how Dawn will talk Buffy into having Sam live with her as a roommate.

(And what exactly was it that Sam did that was the last straw for his roommate? [Brady?]).
Comments from author:
lol! Isn't that sweater seen terrible?! I was horrified right along with Dawn when I wrote it. As for the rest of your questions, they'll be answered in upcoming chapters. :-) I switch it up so you'll be able to see how everyone's taking this situation. Thanks so much for the great review! I'm about to post the next chapter, I hope you enjoy it as well!
Review By [clockworkorange] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from liit
Review:
I just realize that you're the author of "gone." Sometimes i tend to ignore the author"s name and I shouldn't do that because you guys work hard writing for us. Anywa'z I just want to say that I throughly enjoyed reading "Gone" and I reread them atleast twice already. So I can't wait for this story to come to fruitition and see what's going to happen. thanks for letting me know the age thing...I guess buffy will be robbing the cradle...hehehe :)
Comments from author:
lol! Well, Buffy tends to end up with older men (WAY older), and that hasn't worked out so well in the past... So maybe she'll have better luck with a younger man. :-P And I'm so glad you enjoyed Gone! It made me feel all warm and fuzzy to hear that! lol!
Review By [liit] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from liit
Review:
great so far, i was smiling the whole time, the whole scenerio between dawn and sam. love dawn's internal pep talk..
so how old is sam here or what year he's in stanford? can't wait for sam and buffy to live in together...sam's first impression of buffy especially that she is "bounty hunter" :)
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for checking out my story! I'm so glad you liked it! Dawn is 19 and in her freshman year at Stanford, Sam is 21 and in his third year, and Buffy is 23. You'll get the "first impression" in the next chapter. :-P Thanks again for reading, and thanks for the review!
Review By [liit] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Waverly
Review:
I loved your characterization of Dawn, and Sam's reaction to the hurricane that is a Summers sister.
Wonderful and intriguing, can't wait to see where this goes.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad you liked it! It took me a while to get Dawn's special brand of insanity down. :-P Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Review By [Waverly] • Date [16 Jan 11] • Not Rated
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