Oh, you made me laugh and because I have a cold caused me to cough, be very very glad it wasn't a poop cough again! If it was I would find you and give you my cold and not let you have anything for it but cough drops! I love this chapter the game that Xander Faith and Harry are playing is just to wonderful although I would really love to know the rules to getting points. I really love what Gordon is doing to the officers that have been harassing the ISWC, sadly it shows how little brain power the police force has to do such a thing when they learn who backs them. I am as always eagerly awaiting the next installment to this wonderful story.
Review By [twlight] • Date [11 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
I can't wait to see what James does to Dumbledore for what happened not only to himself and Harry, but his wife, his twin brother, his best friend, his werewolf friend, et al.
I don't think even Voldemort would stand in James' way when it came to exacting his vengeance; he's a nutjob himself and knows just how dangerous dealing with another nutjob is.
Can't wait to see more of this.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Another fun chapter to a good read. Please keep up the good work. Did find one problem you might want to fix. Your totals as far as points go for each letter doesn't make much sense, I think you left out a number on Harry's points. You have Harry in the lead with 185, followed by Xander with 1289 and finally Faith with 981. Not make much sense here, I think you meant to put that Harry had something like 1850 points rather than 185.
Comments from author:
I originally had the scores in italics, but the formatting got screwed up when I did that, so I just put the ' around them instead. I must have accidentally erased it when I did that. It's fixed now though, so thanks for pointing it out.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
