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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RankoNakajima
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So...what happened to Willow without her yellow-crayon buddy?
Review By [RankoNakajima] • Date [15 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Morgomir
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Sorry for the late review (exams). Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from TJG
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Interesting the divergences that are occurring.

I wonder if Buffy will go to Sunnydale given the changes that have occurred.
Review By [TJG] • Date [5 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from eriktheviking
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A cracking good story with well done oddball humor to keep it from going too dark.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [3 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ChiVayne
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Nice to see a new chapter, I am enjoying your story.
Review By [ChiVayne] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Tjin
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Thanks for the great story.
Review By [Tjin] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Bobboky
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Very good
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Orchamus
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And the black swordsman is on his way to vengeance, after having met and aided the Slayer. One can only wonder how he'll change canon next?
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Selias
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Great to see a new chapter of this! Especially since I've actually read a dozen volumes of the manga now and know what's going on.
Review By [Selias] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Past Donor)Jewel
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Interesting and entertaining - looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Doodle
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Excellent chapter. 1,000/10
Review By [Doodle] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Alastor
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Very nice to see some new updates and a pretty good story so far. Since Buffy seems to be into mysterious older guys then Alexander will be a much better choice than Angel ever could be, not to mention that he's much much stronger if even Buffy can't lift the dragonslayer, though I think she probably could given enough practice. I'm interested in seeing how Willow will have faired without Xander there at all. Regardless I'm definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Morgomir
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Another wacky and great story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from SCIfilover
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Its a shame that you haven't updated this story since may. I really like the chapters you've published so far. Anyway there are some points I would like to make to you and I hope that you will take thm into consideration if you ever continue this fic.

1] Alexander's name should remain Alexander and not be shortened to Xander.

2] If your story is going to have a pairing, the females are limited, imo, to Faith and Cordelia. I lean more toward Faith.

3] No Slayer wanking. From your chapters own written words Alexander has been fighting since he was a child, plus him being Gutts reborn means he's probably stronger and more experienced than a slayer - either Buffy or Faith.

4] Please don't turn him into a emo teenage pussy. Keep him badass.
Review By [SCIfilover] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Elleria
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Looking forward to the next bit.
Review By [Elleria] • Date [4 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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