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Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp

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Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from AXanFan
Review:
This is really a review for the whole series -- I just finished reading it. All of it has been good, but my favorite parts have been Xander with Jack -- the main reason I started reading this is because of them.

You have a pretty nice writing style -- there were some typos or misused words throughout the series, but overall very good. You made your characters believable -- especially the known characters. A lot of people don't really get them right -- you expect some differences -- they are older and in different situations so it is not a re-hash of what we already know about them, but you still have to be true to their core personalities or they are just characters with same name.

Anyway -- hope to see more soon and Thanks for sharing.
Review By [AXanFan] • Date [5 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Well done!
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [4 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from SlowMercury
Review:
I liked this--I hope to see the whole long epic of Tyler's summer camp some day.

It occurs to me that Tyler is going to be one *hell* of an unexpected Slayer.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [3 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
This was really excellent. I enjoyed the update on this series and on Tyler.
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [3 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from pkoceres
Review:
This is awesome and I really enjoyed it. :)
Review By [pkoceres] • Date [3 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from serenityselena
Review:
nice story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [3 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from theraceskong
Review:
I really enjoyed this. I'm looking forward to more in this series.
Review By [theraceskong] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from janeaverage
Review:
Seriously, I love you. So excited to see more of Tyler, and to have it turn out well for him, in such a real sort of way. Like life might not be sunshine and rainbows, but contentment's within easy reach.
Review By [janeaverage] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from Crayshack
Review:
Thank you for adding this. Tyler is one of my favorite OC's.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from Greywizard
Review:
Excellent.

Hope we see more of Tyler's and his friends' experiences.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from Bugeyedmonster
Review:
Added this story to my recs.
Review By [Bugeyedmonster] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from ShooflyPie
Review:
This was beautiful. This and the previous fic brought me in to Tyler's world and told me a story I (somehow) haven't heard before.

If stories about Tyler ended up being a gigantic 50,000-word epic, I would follow follow follow with bated breath.

Um, no pressure. I just mean that it seems like Tyler has so much more to experience and to show us, and I'd love to keep listening to him, you know?
Review By [ShooflyPie] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from (Past Donor)LisaF
Review:
Fantastic. Really, this is just incredibly well done. I volunteer with LGBT teens, and you have Tyler's voice down pat. So much of what you have here rang true - from turning his back while the girls changed, to the over-earnest watcher who's trying his hardest, to the ever-present elephant in the room.

The only thing that struck an off-chord for me was this: "Tyler didn't expect to be sharing a room with other girls." The word "other" implies that Tyler thinks of himself as one as well. If you don't mind a suggestion, perhaps "other slayers" would work instead?
Comments from author:
*sighs in relief*

Thank you! I'm glad this works. And thank you for the suggestion. I've changed the text accordingly.
Review By [(Past Donor)LisaF] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Five Things Tyler Didn't Expect from Slayer Camp" from HarmMarie
Review:
Liked this.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [2 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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