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Review of chapter "The Shield III" from raxadian
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Buffy will now when she is close to be done as she will start to get heavily sabotaged.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Shield II" from raxadian
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Well, old Scratch probably likes to have Buffy as his rider.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Shield I" from raxadian
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Well, this will be probably amusing to read.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue" from raxadian
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Well, I guess that by now Buffy things that is useless to try to resist.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [25 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC II" from BlueEyedBrigadier
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Oh jeez...she had to wreck the Containment Unit, didn't she? I know Scratch doesn't give much care to matters outside his purview but releasing ALL the spirits trapped within the vault represents a rather large shift in supernatural trouble that I'm sure is going to set off a few mystical RADARs ;D

Amazing story so far, texaswookie! Hope to see more of it soon!
Review By [BlueEyedBrigadier] • Date [1 Oct 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC II" from Harry
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Nice to see some old familiar faces in this chapter. We have Jarod (The Pretender) back again, The Ghostbusters, showing up. New faces are Greg House, Wilson, and Sarah Barzini aka the Witchblade bearer. Now to see who else shows up.
Comments from author:
Still not sure how house took over the entire chapter like that.
Review By [Harry] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC II" from CageFire
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Great new chapter. :) Keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad ya liked it.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC II" from Shadowcub
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Dang missed a bunch of updates........Walker Texas Ranger, I hate that guy, more Chuck Norris bull bull, lol.

The Ghostbuster and that crazy woman Sara? MORE~!
Comments from author:
While I enjoyed watching Walker I never understood the whole fascination with Norris.

Glad you like some of the other characters I'm using.

Look on the bright side of missing some updates though, now you can enjoy them all together instead of waiting.
Review By [Shadowcub] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC II" from Chan
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Well the possible price tag for this jaunt just busted the glass ceiling.
Comments from author:
Ayep
Review By [Chan] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC II" from fanreaderonetwo
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Interesting.

You need to clean up this section, much of it is duplicated.
I split it where the dupe starts.

"Come to think of it she didn't think she had ever been hurt this bad before. To make it worse she couldn't remember everything that had happened while she had been in her Rider form. Which was something that she had thought that she had gotten over. It had been a while since one of her missions caused her to black out. She remembered busting into Ghostbuster HQ blowing through the front door asking where their vault was and even blasting her way into said vault. It was after that though where things got fuzzy. She vaguely remembered that the spirits/souls/ghosts or whatever the currently politically correct term was had burst out of the vault and upwards into an angry cloud of spectral energy. She had caught the barest taste of so many evil and dark beings feeling their pain, anger, and vengeance addled selves. Then there's was squat. She wondered if the sight of so many dark spirits had overridden her mind and allowed the Rider instincts to take command or something like. She also wanted to know how it was that she had gotten hurt. It felt like her bones were on fire for some strange reason or other. She didn't think that there was anything that could leave any sort of lasting damage on her. With her Slayer healing and her Rider healing she should be pretty much invincible.

She lifted her head up slightly as she heard the clink of glass on the counter and saw a bottle of chilled beer sitting in front of her. Not even hesitating she grabbed the bottle and rolled it along her arms wishing that her various healing factors would hurry up and fix her already. It did give her a new appreciation for when Xander had come by and said his bones felt like they were on fire after a hard day at a job site. She hadn't hurt like this since an uber vamp had dropped a wall o Buffy groaned slightly as she leaned against the counter of the bar. She didn't know what those guys had hit her with, but she was still feeling the pain from whatever it was. She hadn’t even been aware that there was anything that could actually hurt her like that anymore.

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Come to think of it, she didn't think she had ever been hurt this bad before. To make it worse, she couldn't remember everything that had happened while she had been in her Rider form. Which was something that she had thought that she had gotten over. Which was annoying since it had been a while since one of her missions caused her to black out.

She remembered busting into Ghostbuster HQ, blowing through the front door, asking the Ghostbusters where their vault was, and even blasting away at said vault. It was after that though where things got fuzzy. She vaguely remembered that the spirits/souls/ghosts or whatever the currently politically correct term was had burst out of the vault and upwards into an angry cloud of spectral energy. She had caught the barest taste of so many evil and dark beings feeling their pain, anger, and vengeance addled selves. Then there was squat. She wondered if the sight of so many dark spirits had overridden her mind and allowed the Rider instincts to take command or something like. She also wanted to know how it was that she had gotten hurt.

It felt like her very bones themselves were on fire for some strange reason or other. She didn't think that there was anything that could leave any sort of lasting damage on her. What with her whole Slayer package and her Rider package, she should be pretty much invincible. It did give her a new appreciation for when Xander had said his bones felt like they were on fire after a hard day at a job site. She hadn't hurt like this since an uber vamp had dropped a wall on her. That or the time Caleb threw her around that classroom for fun. It was the first time since becoming the Rider that she had really felt like she had been in a fight. Which was different from the fact that she had almost gotten used to having joint pains every night from being tossed around by the supernatural."
Comments from author:
Thanks for catching that mistake. Sorry it took so long to fix it got a little busy.
Review By [fanreaderonetwo] • Date [13 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC I" from Chan
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Well now that's a pretty bad day for new York all told.
Comments from author:
pretty much.
Review By [Chan] • Date [12 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC I" from DarthTenebrus
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Time to clean up the town again. ..who ya gonna call now?

Well let's see...you got a Vampire Slayer that's also a Ghost Rider; the Ghostbusters couldn't hold her AND she let out all the spooks and creepy-crawlies they had managed to lock up over however many years...ya got three witches in San Fran that have been able to help her out before with her particular hangups...ya got a Council of Watchers in Merry Ole that know how to keep a lid on situations like this...

Yeah...who DO ya call?
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it. This chapter was one of the original parts of the story, and has been swirling around in the back of my head off and on for a while now.
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC I" from Harry
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Nice job on this chapter. You got Egon and Peter down perfectly. And Ray, Peter, along with Winston got it right: Until the equipment is back up to stuff, there is NOT WAY that they are capable of taking on the Rider. No, something like this, you need help. BIG HELP! Time to find and contact Dr. Stephen Strange on this matter.
Comments from author:
Yeah I had to channel both the brainy guy and the snarky guy to write them. No Doc Strange, there will be a mystical warrior just not him. Not a marvel character either.
Review By [Harry] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "NYC I" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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lol! great update :)
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "NYC I" from CageFire
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Great new chapter, keep up the good work. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [9 Aug 14] • Not Rated
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