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Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from Harry
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Well, the Charmed Ones now know or at least suspect that The Rider and Buffy are related in some way. Port Columbia does not ring any bells, but I think the next chapter will give me the answers that I need.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Charmed III" from Harry
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UH OH CHONGO! Seems that Buffy has got the Charmed Ones worried that she might NOT be Buffy, with her tossing Energy balls around. Time for her to find her foe, take him out, and MAYBE earn a few marks off the contract with Scratch.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Charmed II" from Harry
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Its not often that Demons and the Charmed Ones work together! Sounds like the Rider has irrated a few people on both sides of the aisle! Now Albrax had best hope that this time in the other dimension gives him the edge he needs, otherwise, its time to meet Scratch!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Charmed I" from Harry
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Mestistophelies is NOT in the habit of passing out respect to beings on the side of Light, so for him to give respect and admiration to Leo says something! Now, lets see how the sisters react when they find out why the Rider is hear. And maybe, JUST maybe, Buffy can channel Faith and get some leather clothing other than her Rider attire!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Pretender-Interlude" from Harry
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Now this chapter was FUN! Seeing Jarod and the rest of the Pretender gang was a treat. And Buffy getting the best of Ms. Parker? LOL! ROFL! Bring on Round two with those! And this time, SCARE Ms. Parker with the power of the Slayer Rider!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shield III" from Harry
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Well, Angel and his group tried to take out the Slayer Rider and failed. Now, its time that Buffy realizes that she may NEVER get out of this contract! She may end up as Dark, if not darker, than Faith was, working for the Mayor!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Shield II" from Harry
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Somehow, I don't think Angel and Company can handle this Rider. Especially since this Rider used to be a Slayer! Now, lets get on with the tale, maybe have B take a trip down the dark side as she does more and more of Scratch's dirty work.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Shield I" from Harry
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I remember a little bit of the show SHIELD. It was interesting. Now, to see what other malcreants that the Slayer Rider is going to have to go after.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Harry
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Sounds to me like B found out the hard way that what Scratch wants, HE GETS! Now its time to see what the Slayer Rider can do. And I would LOVE to get B into more leather as she starts doing more of Scratch's bidding.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue" from Harry
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Sounds to me like B found out the hard way that what Scratch wants, HE GETS! Now its time to see what the Slayer Rider can do. And I would LOVE to get B into more leather as she starts doing more of Scratch's bidding.
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from garrycooper
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Very good.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [24 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from MarcusSLazarus
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The concept of Buffy making a deal with Mephisto was a BIT of a stretch given how her contact with Angel has reinforced the importance of souls to her, but I suppose given her desperation and the conditions she imposed on the deal it probably seemed like a safe bet at the time, and subsequent events seem to have been interesting so far.

I was a bit so-so about the first few chapters, but that was probably just because I don’t know much about the crossover elements you were using there; the recent ones with the Charmed Ones have certainly been more interesting, but the issue of when it’s set is a bit confusing, given the absence of Cole and the presence of Paige and the Source (Is it meant to be set after Cole lost his powers with him away somewhere else at the moment, is it after a new Source has been ‘elected’, or what?).

Still, keep up the fascinating work; should be interesting to see what else Buffy has to deal with as the Rider before her deal’s concluded...
Comments from author:
Glad your enjoying this tale of mine. All the twists and turns I've added have made for paying close attention at times.

As for Buffy making the deal despite her knowledge well Mephisto did catch her at an emotionally weak moment to ensure that he got what he wanted.

As for lack of knowledge on some of my crossovers can't say much on that really.

As for Charmed I've only really seen season 1-3 & 7 I kind of lost interest after Prue's death. What can I say, Prue, Leo, and Billie were my faves for some reason. As for a lack of Cole, well as I remember not every episode had him in it even when he was part of the regular cast. Maybe he was busy doing something else or other. (On the Run from Bounty Hunters or something?) I always thought there was something sleazy about the character and never could get into him enough so I figured any interpertation I gave of him would be off and I would have people who knew the character better wanting to take my scalp.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [11 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from EllandrahSylver
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The Rider is going to be coming upon the Crow, and my guess as to the object of her hunt? India Reyes. She fits the profile, and she'll be tricky to take on.
Review By [EllandrahSylver] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed IV" from djhardim
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Not bad. According to Wikipedia, there were two shows set in Port Columbia, "The Crow: Stairway to Heaven" and "M.A.N.T.I.S.". I'm going to say Buffy will be dealing with the Crow.
Comments from author:
Yep, two spirits of vengeance going at it. Glad you like what I got so far.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Charmed II" from Iceflame
Review:
Got a beta reader? looks like the Slay Ride is ramping up some >:).
Comments from author:
Got tired of sitting on the chapter actually.
Review By [Iceflame] • Date [13 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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