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Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from (Past Donor)KatrinaC
Review:
It's a good start, I'll keep track of it to see where it leads. ~smirks~ I can't wait to see how "tangled" the CSI's get with this.

Keep it up. It's always good to follow the muses.
Review By [(Past Donor)KatrinaC] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from lothlorien
Review:
Whatever you do do NOT leave it as a one-shot... it's too good. I love the idea and the first chapter is brilliant. Please do write one
Review By [lothlorien] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from (Past Donor)RavenWoodbane
Review:
Please sir I want some more...awesome start hope to see more soon
Review By [(Past Donor)RavenWoodbane] • Date [10 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from Neverwillmini
Review:
Well, the idea is intriguing but there's not enough yet for me to decide whether I like it yet or not. For now, I'd like to see more.
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from SamDragon
Review:
Interesting start.Needs a Beta.Has potential for a good story.Please continue.
Review By [SamDragon] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from SuukiAldrea
Review:
I like this! But how is xander going to do all he needs to if he's five? Will he be able to change under certain cercomstances? Update soon please! Ja ne!
Review By [SuukiAldrea] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from troy
Review:
I really like the beginning of this story. Please continue.
Review By [troy] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from oldgirllost
Review:
One of the better "little Xander premises. Please go for it.
Review By [oldgirllost] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from LucyH
Review:
I say continue it if you have an idea for an overall story because I would love to see why Dru needs Xander to be five years old and in Las Vegas to help Angel and Spike.

Response to Author Comment:
Have you thought about making it a snippet story? Just taking what ideas you do have to create a string of one-shot snapshots of the world your creating. Would allow you to skip some things while presenting an over reaching arc of plot.
Comments from author:
I have a vague idea to continue this with, but not much of one.
Review By [LucyH] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from Drakan
Review:
a little confusing, but a good start to a good story!
Review By [Drakan] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "White Knight Lost in Vegas" from eriktheviking
Review:
Well written but too much left hanging for a one-shot.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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