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Review of chapter "Part 12" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [22 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
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I was reading the bit about SoundBlasters examination.. And stoped mid word.

All that went through my mind (with a dawning sense of dread) was this- Mother Fuck! Soundwave....

The S#*& just hit me like a ton of bricks
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [20 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Aw! Bluestreak all nervous being a big brother. How sweet! I love it! I can't wait for the next chapter
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [19 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from Genuka
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you do know that you're evil? Right? Who's his Decepticon parent anyway? Evil evil evil author....
Review By [Genuka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from Almadynis
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*dies laughing* This is precious! Awesome! I love it!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from kayron
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Why are the Decepticons so interested in Soundblaster? Are they planning on kidnapping him? What is with the 'con coding in Soundblaster? Is that going to turn out to be a bad thing? I do like how caring all of the Autobots are with the sparkling.
Review By [kayron] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from msdarque
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Surprising, informative, fun... I loved reading it! :D
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from Eureka
Review:
AWWWWWE so Bluestreak is his brudder. That is so sweet! ANd Bluestreak wants to learn how to be a big brother wow!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 12" from Matron
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Wow. The CNA coding is a bit werid because both of SB's fathers are both autobots, but if you thing of it as human DNA and that Baricade is Prowl's brother it would make some weird sense in a way to let SB have decipticon coding.
Comments from author:
Yes, but Prowl is half-Decepticon. Although, he has more Autobot coding. Barricade is the only one from that family that showed a more Decpeticon leaning. I take a slightly different view on Decepticons. I've already mentioned that Decepticons used to protect Cybertron from invaders. Also, it does not have to be only two bots that contribute coding. Also, there is still SoundBlaster's secret to think of.

Some information on sparklings should be explained in the next couple chapters.
Review By [Matron] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from EroSlackerMicha
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wonder how SB will deal with Ravage, Frenzy and Laserbeak. I shudder when the big 'Cons learn of him. talk about a smackdown. the battle from Dark of the Moon will be tame compared.
anyways keep up the good work and give us more soon please.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 12" from silvergaurd
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Love the new chapter. Little xan is soooo cute. Hope to see more.
Review By [silvergaurd] • Date [17 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11" from spurious
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Ahhh. They left baby food as a welcoming gift.
Review By [spurious] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11" from RyenSelenityCaliburn
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Great chapter!!! Loved it! Totally looking forward to more! Kinda felt like going .. 'Duhn.. dun.. dunnn..' at the end of the chapter.. lol! Awesome job!
Ryen
Review By [RyenSelenityCaliburn] • Date [6 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 1" from (Past Donor)Kanzaki
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*has read to chapter 11*

Why so epic?! Please continue this story, it is actually thought out and well done.
Review By [(Past Donor)Kanzaki] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 11" from Almadynis
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Awww! That is so sweet and cute! ...and kinda creepy, but still! Can't wait for more!
Review By [Almadynis] • Date [5 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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