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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from arturusoriginal
Review:
Nice, very nice indeed. Another great, engaging story that left me lamenting when I reached the end of the chapter!
Review By [arturusoriginal] • Date [10 Feb 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from bookworm
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This is a very interesting story! I just found it today through someone's fan-art of it, and I blew through the whole thing. I'll be glad to see more should you ever have the time/inspiration to write it.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [28 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from JJDudeman
Review:
Pretty nice job blending the worlds together! I like your take on pretty much every character, they're all 3-dimensional to some degree.
Review By [JJDudeman] • Date [31 Dec 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from bradsan
Review:
it's been almost a year and still no update. That is so wrong.

Please try to update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from HMaxMarius
Review:
Really enjoyed this. Hope you get the urge to continue it someday...

I'm leaving it 'tracked' in hope! :)
Review By [HMaxMarius] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from bradsan
Review:
Hey you forgot to update.
Please update.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from arianwyn
Review:
I really like this story and hope you continue. I had not seen the concept that the Watchers were formed by Egeria. It is a very unique perspective and I think that it joins the two universes seamlessly without destroying either cannon.
Review By [arianwyn] • Date [24 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11" from ikepear
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"“If I don’t?”
“Then I’m afraid that I will allow you to be taken by Doctor Maggie Walsh to the Demon Research Initiative. The price they will pay ifor this is the addition of Council watchdogs to the group to make sure they don’t do something cosmically stupid, but I doubt you would survive long enough for it to make much of a difference in any case.”
Janet and Hammond were shocked by this ruthless statement; Janet opened her mouth to protest when Buffy slumped in the bed. She had no doubt that Dormer would do it, so, “All right, you win, I’ll guard this stupid thing.”

For me the above is a deal-breaker, which is a shame. Buffy/Stargate stories are a fav, & I was enjoying this one, though I'm not fond of or interested in Hank. I'm even less interested in Helen Mirren-like watcher super bitches.
Comments from author:
Sorry to hear it. Thanks for the review
Review By [ikepear] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
Really enjoying this story. It is quite a different approach. I really like the Hank you're creating. I was thinking of writing story with Hank as a Tokra who Buffy runs into when she shows up at the SGC, but I hadn't gotten around to it yet... This is a very different idea, however, and one I really like. I look forward to what comes next!

Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks Blue, glad you are liking it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [11 Oct 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Shadowman
Review:
Good and enjoyable story, more soon I hope.
Review By [Shadowman] • Date [30 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from deathgeonous
Review:
Fun fic, and how is Wesley not evil with his "Yes, I do want to give my boss a stress related heart attack" philosophy? Hehe. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thanks.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from bradsan
Review:
An update yes.

I really like Wesley this way. He is more relaxed and mature and very confident even more than Giles ever was. You do know that Wesley is smarter, if he wants to and not blinded, than Giles ever was. He will think about the situation Buffy is forced in and won't like it so he wants a way out. Knowing him he will find one. Those three together and the SGC, Hammond included will do anything in their power to find a way to get Buffy out of the Councils hold and the NID.

The reviewers are right Buffy will never trust Diana and trust is something Buffy needs to have before Diana could say to her I want you to Jump and Buffy would say how high. even Giles after the Master and the test had to earn it back. She will never go in to something Diana wants and always will question her motives and goes in with a healthy caution. I'm wondering what Faith will think about it when she knows everything.

Hope you will consider a quick update because I really like this one and love how Hank take care of his daughter.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm not quite sure I'd agree that Wesley was smarter than Giles, I think the character had the advantage of being in a show with a more 'adult' cast and being on a more even level with Angel than Giles was ever with Buffy. It also didn't hurt that Alexis Denisof didn't have to commute to England so he stuck around for the whole show, rather than the contrived reason for Giles decided to head back to England when Anthony Stewart Head decided he didn't want to anymore.

I have to say that I am happy with the response that Diana Dormer has generated, when I designed the character I knew she wasn't going to be liked, but the amount of comment that she has generated exceeds my wildest expectations.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from clarityfades
Review:
Good chapter. I really like that this Wes seems to be more ready for the responsibilities of a Watcher than canon-Wes in Sunnydale. And he even taught Buffy something about the "feel-good" demon. I also appreciate that he isn't trying to stifle her social growth & even encouraged her to date the new boy. And his line about Dormer's potential heart attack cracked me up.
Comments from author:
Glad you liked it, thanks for the review.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [19 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Inoeth
Review:
Nice to see this story updated. I'm looking forward to seeing more. I would suggest you start building on the main plot sooner than later as this last chapter did feel a bit of a filler to me. None the less, I am glad you updated and look forward to your next one.
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [17 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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