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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Current Donor)vidicon
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Considering Faith's home life any sort of regular care and true attention might easily win her affection. But not even Dormer can be all bad. I wonder how Kendra will fare in this universe.

Thanks for writing
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from serenityselena
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nicely done.... life goes on for our heroes...
looking forward to reading the next chapter ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [16 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from ShalaDakiri
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I like your Wesley. Of course, he had a reality check a lot faster.

As far as people commenting about Dormer, we're only really seeing her from Buffy's and the SGC's perspectives. Manipulative and ruthless, sure, but I think they forget that earlier scene showing Faith's obvious loyalty. At this point, I'd guess Faith is actually less messed up than Buffy, since the problems from Kakistos, Post, Finch, and the Mayor haven't happened.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Gideon
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Good to see another chapter! Things seem to be settling down after the excitement of Jolinar's arrival. Buffy and Wesley should be able to settle into a routine and if Wesley wants to irritate his superiors in the watchers council it should help him work much better with Buffy!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from immortalsilence
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love it thanks more pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
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Great update, though I hope Janet and Buffy become friends again.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from BrownFinderth
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Thanks, thanks and thanks!! I really like where Buffy is going and that Wesley is being considerate of her!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Current Donor)mmooch
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Or aim to kill...depending on the situation. It's cool that Buffy and Wes seem to be getting along reasonably well so far.
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from war
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Good to see Buffy trying to get her life back on track. That talk with her self defense instructor should be interesting.

Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
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In the elite forces of the military like the SAS and Seal Teams, trust is critical.

In a situation that leaves no time for thinking, you trust each other and if someone yells do this you do that because you trust him.

Dormer has destroyed any chance that Buffy will EVER trust her.

In an apocalyptic situation, she might hesitate to do what Dormer says because of that lack of trust.

End of world.

Giles (up until the stupidity of the last two seasons) understood how important that trust with Buffy was. Which made him a very different kind of Watcher.

Dormer however is the typical Slayer is just a tool watcher.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from burmafrdnow
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I have to roll my eyes when someone says

"I will Do what needs to be done"

That can cover a whole lot of stupidity

Like the Crucimentum

its amazing what a bureaucracy can consider
"what needs to be done"

Dormer took a big risk; that Buffy would not snap. Considering her limited knowledge of Buffy, it was a very dumb thing to do.


As regards the Initiative, I would be immensely surprised if the Watchers Council and Tok'ra do not put a stop to it. Especially considering the morons running it

Walsh is one of those what I call 20 degree types.

A circle is 360 degrees. Walsh is real smart in that limited area; but blind otherwise. ANd willfully so

Anyone who gets involved in the supernatural world and does not account for magic and mystical forces will die badly sooner or later. As in the show.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
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Not bad at all.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AnFan
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Really glad to see an update. I like this story a lot.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from AllenPitt
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ok, she's all settled in with new watcher, the SGC etc and everyone is in place. Time to see how she fits in? Also the 'talk' with the unarmed combat instructor. That should be fun.
Angel being dead is going to have ramifications--whole shanshu prophecy derailed? Or more likely Spike or someone else winds up with a soul and it's them. * Weirdest possibility would be if Darla gets raised, re-vamped, souled, and it's her.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from kiwi
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excellent chapter! :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
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