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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Freiheit
Review:
I really like how you started this. Its really a neat ideal with her father and the Doctor. Keep it up.
Comments from author:
Thanks, glad you liked it.
Review By [Freiheit] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
An interesting AU so far. Looking forward to seeing where you take it. Will Buffy be contemporary with "Jon" at the high school?
Comments from author:
No, this is Season One of Stargate, so mini-Jack will not be showing up for six more seasons.

Glad you liked it.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from nicjphill
Review:
Interesting start! Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Nice original start. You have picked non-primary characters from both shows which make a nice change.I also like how you have Buffy looking suspiciously around for watchers and I can see how this could lead to her making some clandestine investigations and finding out some things about the DSRT teams. Hopefully she can restrain herself from immediately attacking when Teal'c turns up because I bet he will feel strange to her. I almost hope Wesley will turn up because at least he will be immediately obvious as a watcher. Maybe he will be pretending to be a psychiatrist sent to help Buffy talk through things, since she is not at school yet. I would like to see Janet ask him a few casual questions and realise that he actually knows nothing about psychiatry!
Comments from author:
Sorry, while Wesley will be in the story, I have other plans for him.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
I like this set-up a lot! A young Buffy in Colorado Springs could cause a lot of trouble, and I love the idea of Janet having some kind of relationship with her (and possibly a romantic relationship with Hank). Looking forward to an update.
Comments from author:
Thanks, hope I don't disappiont.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)mmooch
Review:
So cool that you have Hank and Janet as the primaries in Buffy's life right now. Not that Joyce and Jack/Daniel/Sam are bad or anything, but I like the different feel of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [(Current Donor)mmooch] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from celebrindal
Review:
I love it! At this point in canon, Hank's really not that much of a d-bag. Yeah, he had her committed, but let's be honest. If your child burnt down a school building and then claimed that it was full of vampires, what would you do? Call a psychiatrist, for sure.

Never actually seen SG1, but have picked up lots from reading various fic. I like Janet, and I like that she's going to be around. Excited to read more. :)

ETA: I hope it takes awhile for Buffy to figure out/get to the SGC. I feel like a lot of authors rush it, and I think it wouldn't be that straight forward. At least Buffy hasn't had the Initiative to scar her with relation to the armed forces.
Comments from author:
Other than the odd feeling from the Mountian every now and then, it will be a few chapters before Buffy is introduced to the SGC.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [celebrindal] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)wizathogwarts
Review:
Interesting setup, never seen one with Hank as the good guy.
This is obviously pre-Cassie so I'm looking forward to where this goes.
Keep up the good ideas and writing!
Comments from author:
Thanks, I hope I don't disapoint.
Review By [(Current Donor)wizathogwarts] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
I like this one. First, that you've set the time-frame for while Buffy still has contact with her father and second that you've put him in NORAD but not the SGC.

Based on the fact that Janet is just moving in, I'm going to guess the lockdown was due to the Touched disease in Broca Divide? It'll be interesting to see what happens when Cassie moves in with Janet.
Comments from author:
You are correct on timeline.

Hope I don't disapoint.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from justapiranha
Review:
I like it so far.
Review By [justapiranha] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
I like your story. Of course any story with Dr. Janet as a main character is a good sign for me. :) And having a 'good guy' Hank is intersting, too. I look forward to reading more of your story and seeing how Buffy eventually fits into the SGC. If she does, of course.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AllenPitt
Review:
I like this story idea. Ok, it's really sad, but it's unusual to see a "good Hank" story, not to mention getting him & Buffy over to the SGC. Usually it's Buffy and Joyce (if at all). Next door to Janet F. is even more fun.
The Council will definitely send someone eventually but not for a while. Kendra likely got 'chosen' so she'll be sent to the Hellmouth (I'll bet) and that will distract the council quite a bit. Maybe Wesley will show up? It'd be funny if he got a job at the SGC (linguistics/ ancient languages) to be around Buffy... I bet the SGC constantly searching for ancient language experts would end up with them at least trying to recruit people who were watchers....
If Janet notices Buffy leaving on 'patrol' she might get suspicious ... but she'd think B. needed counseling. Displays of super abilities would get any SGC person suspecting Goa'uld or some such...
Comments from author:
Wesley will be putting in an apperance. Glad you like the idea, it was a plot bunny that has been gnawing away at my resolve, so I decided to give into it. Hope you like where I go with it.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
interesting start looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [war] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from texaswookie
Review:
A careing Hank that's different and no instant info dump either both very nice.
Comments from author:
Thanks, it will be a bit before both groups become truly aware of each other.
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Interesting beginning. I don't recall ever seeing an SG-1 cross begin like this.

Kudos for the originality.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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