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Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from kiwi
excellent chapter! :)
Review By [kiwi] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from RevDorothyL
Glad to see a new chapter of this, and -- so far, at least -- Wesley seems to be off to a much better start as Buffy's Watcher than he ever was in Sunnydale.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [15 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from serenityselena
a very informative chapter...
not everything is sunshine and roses but it will surely get better.....
eagerly awaiting to read more ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [19 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from breve
very very interesting.
i almost wish i hadn't found this story so soon 'cos i want more.
thanks for sharing.
Review By [breve] • Date [18 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Callista
I really like this story so far. I love that you have Faith there, it would be great to see her and Buffy become friends... Can't wait to read about the sparring matches between Buffy and Jolinar, and Buffy and Teal'c...

Review By [Callista] • Date [16 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from ncatt
“Sometimes I wish I would just be told what was going on around me,” he muttered to himself.

So I was just rereading this and I was wondering which vengeance demon was hanging around to grant this. The Patron Demon of Clueless Parents?
Review By [ncatt] • Date [15 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from spikeismine
I can't wait to read more. Please update soon.
Review By [spikeismine] • Date [2 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from BrownFinderth
It'll be interesting the proposed sparring between Buffy and Teal'c!!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [12 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from immortalsilence
love it more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [10 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from Morgomir
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from bradsan
Buffy gets the best support system a Slayer can get. You do realize that. The soldiers she is gone work with and SG1 don't like it when you try to mess with people they consider as one of them. Oh and Teal'c will love it to patrol with Buffy and have a good fight outside the mountain. She will have the best "protection" she can get and they won't let her out alone. Can't wait to see the faces of the soldiers when they see this Little girl teaching them how to fight. This gone be so good.

Faith, still a bratty child who thinks that hiding that she is scared/uncertain will be the best offense. I hope that Buffy will break through her defense and shows her that she is not alone in this world. I really hope that after the lousy start they will get along after a while and we don't get a second Sunnydale. What will Faith think when she hears about the thread Dianne gave Buffy to let the NID take her to experience with if she won't cooperate. How old do you make Faith in here because in most stories they make her younger than Buffy while Buffy is one year younger than Faith. Buffy is born 19 January 1981 and Faith is born 14 December 1980. So I'm a little curious about that.

Can't wait for the next update. Good as always.
Comments from author:
Thank you. Yeah, I've spent more than the ideal plotting point thinking what the boys and girls from the SGC will add to Slaying.

As soon as I'm able.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from SlowMercury
Ah, Faith and Buffy, already not getting along. I hope that relationship gets a chance to improve. Although I do think Buffy has legit grounds to call Dormer out on anything and everything, in light of Dormer's willingness to have her killed for no real gain (sorry, Dormer, but just I don't think an eye in the Initiative is good enough if you're not even going to get enough power to call the shots).

At least Buffy and her dad are doing better. Buffy really does need some serious therapy, since she's lost every trusted adult figure she ever had. Hank might have come back, but everyone else is dead. And Buffy's peer support is all back in Sunnydale. I hope the Wesley-Buffy-Hank-Jolinar team-up works out.

And I too am looking forward to the Buffy v. Teal'c fights. Please keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thank you. Do my best.
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from (Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle
Woohoo! Great update! Leaves us wanting more. ^.^ Which I can't wait for. Looking forward to the Buffy/Teal'c sparring. And Jack suggesting Candy Striper made me laugh. Love it.

Comments from author:
Thank you, do my best.
Review By [(Recent Donor)ConstanceTruggle] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from RevDorothyL
the Tok'ra having technical seniority (at least) over the chief Watchers on the Council is a really interesting twist.
Comments from author:
Thank you.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 15" from trongod
So we get to see Faith pre-Kakistos, which I can't see happening now, as the General and jack are /not/ stupid - they will have eyes and ears on the good doctor, and her having a teen with her after the revelations about the Slayer and all will set off their we Might Be paranoid But We Have Excellent Reason Alarms...

So if for any reason the Doc and Faith boogie away, I'd bet they have a discreet and incredibly heavy armed team - or teams - following merrily behind them...

Which in turn makes me wonder about Kendra, who I assume is still alive st this point, so wouldn't the spooks attached to the SGC have done in-depth research on all of Buffy's contacts since her Call? Granted, not that much time has passed, but with a program is Black as the SGC is, there'd freaking better be lots of minds going over every last little detail they have so far and searching out more.

I wouldn't be surprised if the N.I.D. gets involved, although I think the President would order a 'kill if they interfere in any way' order in this case - the prospect of N.I.D. causing the End Of Days per revelations would be more than enough to warrant such a blanket execution order, IMNSHO...
Comments from author:
Yes Kendra is alive and fighting the good fight in Sunnydale. Needless to say I do have plans for what is going on that way.
Review By [trongod] • Date [29 Apr 12] • Not Rated
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