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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rorschach
Review:
sweet read hope for more, but does that mean he can armor himself up like spyke did after he lost control and would it be actual armor or more for aesthetic purposes
Comments from author:
Yeah, he will be able to armour himself with the exoskeleton, and it won't just be decoration.
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Sweet! more plz!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Interesting start. Have you thought about why Xander has been hiding this ability from everyone, or how long he has had it? I hope he can get Faith on side because it would be bad if she used it against him and convinced Buffy that he needs to die.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
VERY good, indeed! Be interesting to see you take this further, as I don't think Buffy would hesitate from attacking should/when she sees Xander's mutation; Willow, on the other hand...? Jewish descent and internet savvy, so she understands the bigotry against mutants - but will she be able to realize it IS a mutation and not Xander being possessed by some demon???
Lots of conflict there, especially if she feels betrayed that (1) HER Xander hasn't trusted her enough to tell her this secret; and (2) HER Xander is siding with 'that slut' Faith against her... well, and Buffy, too.

Faith, on the other hand, now has someone like her Watcher, someone that had her back, someone she may just be able to rely on. Someone, unlike her Watcher, who has had nearly the same past, and can actually begin to understand what she's gone through, why she is the way she is now. And once she realizes down deep that Xander has NEVER told anyone else this deepest secret of his - not even WILLOW - she has someone that might even be more than a friend, or an evenings diversion; someone who will actually do whatever it takes to keep her from harm - even if it means his own life is the cost.
Review By [trongod] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from race
Review:
please write more! and longer chapters! Cause I like it and want to see were this goes
Review By [race] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LucyH
Review:
I thought it was excellent and a great rewrite of that part of the episode. I would love to see more of this and where your taking it.
Review By [LucyH] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MathiasBlue
Review:
Moar! Please :P
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [22 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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