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Review of chapter "What makes a First Impression" from FaithWinchester
Review:
Hey! Not fair with the cliffhanging!! Where's Dean? *looking under the bed, hopefully* LOL Can't wait for more!
Comments from author:
What's he doing under *your* bed?! No fair. And you know, what's life without a little cliffhanging? :P
Review By [FaithWinchester] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a First Impression" from Persephone
Review:
I was extremely happy to see this had been updated! I love this story to pieces. You have a wonderful mastery of writing an excellent plot and keeping your reader hooked with the story. I can't wait until the next update.
Comments from author:
Wow, thank you! What a compliment. :)
I'm really delighted that you're enjoying it, and I hope I can keep delivering the same standard. :)
Review By [Persephone] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a First Impression" from Lithie
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You've done an amazing job a blending Faith in the Winchester. Now I'm giddy of anticipation with how you're going to have the Hunters and the Scoobies work together. So far, sooo GOOOOD!

Love reading more!
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm so glad you're enjoying it! :)
Review By [Lithie] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a First Impression" from (Past Donor)GACTsevil
Review:
Yay for updates. I love that Buffy and Faith are meeting for the first time and have no idea what the other is.
Comments from author:
Lol. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I'm sure it'll come out soon and there'll be some fireworks. Hopefully, anyway, if I can manage fireworks. Sparkly candles, maybe... :P
Review By [(Past Donor)GACTsevil] • Date [6 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Responsibility" from Cmiller
Review:
hmm. I can't wait for more. I really want to see a Faith/Bufffy confrintation plus the youngest Winchester wiggling the two out of trouble with Snyder.
Comments from author:
A confrontation... with fists, no? ;)
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Responsibility" from greeniron
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I'm intrigued and I'm looking forward to finding out more.
Review By [greeniron] • Date [19 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Hunter" from ianquest
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An excellent addition to the body of work. You manage to make it work despite the relatively slow pacing, providing a good glimpse into the background of Faith's growing up a Winchester - and it's so spot-on that Dean feels guilty for being unable to save victims who might have been killed before he was even born, and buries it under a layer of iron-hard determination, with a veneer of cocky snark over the top...

Looking forward to seeing more as you add it!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing- I'm so glad you enjoyed it.

No doubt, the pacing is slow- this 'verse is a bit... scattered. The chapters come as the muse wishes, but I am deliberately holding off on introducing the Scoobies because I want to set the right tone for the crossover proper and I can only do that once. :)

I love Dean (that much is probably obvious) so I'm relieved to hear that he's in-character because I've been worried about it. Anyhoo, there should be more soon and I'll do my best not to disappoint. :)
Review By [ianquest] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Hunter" from greeniron
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This is great -- I'm always glad to see more Dean. Also -- the ways that Faith serves as a relief for Dean by broadening his and Sam's relationship continues to be interesting. Thanks for posting!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing- I'm thrilled you're continuing to enjoy it. :)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Hunter" from Cmiller
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I wasn't dissappointed cuz that was great.

You know I think a great way for the younger Winchesters to meet the Scoobs would be to have the two slayers run into each other and have Faith swindle Snyder into not getting Butfy in trouble... Or something like that.

Can't wait for more.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much- I'm relieved to hear that. Glad you enjoyed it. :)

Lol. I can see that pretty clearly-
"No, sir, I hit her first. She shouldn't be in trouble for defending herself." Faith met the man's gaze and did her best puppy-dog impression. Sam was the best at it, but she was pretty damn good herself. "Dean is going to be so disappointed in me. He's always told me that I shouldn't take people's comments so personally. She didn't mean to be hurtful with her words but that's no excuse for me to start a fight." She sniffled and ducked her head, feigning shyness. She didn't need to look up to see the softening of Snyder's expression. Winchesters 1, School 0.

Hows that? :)
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Rogue" from greeniron
Review:
Thanks for filling in the gap -- and I guess setting up the next chapter? Now I'm really curious about Faith's upcoming confrontation with Giles and Buffy. I'm also curious about Buffy's reaction to the Winchesters, particularly Dean: If I remember, she doesn't have the kind of family support at this point that Faith now does so I can see her envying the support or resenting the controlling attitude or... ? Anyways, thanks for continuing this.
Comments from author:
Yeah, hopefully it'll be the next chapter up though I have a Faith&Sam piece that might sneak in first. Maybe that would be cruel. :)
Early S3 in BTVS is fun to write into because yeah, Buffy is still on uneven ground with the gang after running away for the summer and Angel is back from hell too, so... fun times in Sunnydale by all accounts. I'm looking forward to that, myself, so it shouldn't be long in arriving. :)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Rogue" from isolda
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I'm so glad I found this story! I really like the family dynamics in this. Faith fits right in to the Winchester Family. It's seems like Faith has a good effect on all of the Winchesters...John and Sam seem to be getting along much better than in the show. You did a particularly good job with Dean's characterization. In the show, Dean has a hard time easing up on the 'older brother' role, even when Sam is a fully grown man. In this story Dean takes such joy in his role as older brother that I can really see why he would have a problem letting go.
Comments from author:
Aw, thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Things have definitely changed for the Winchesters with their new addition- I think the family dynamic has definitely changed and it's fun thinking 'what would be different here if...'.
Review By [isolda] • Date [17 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Hellmouth" from greeniron
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I love the Winchesters blending in to a new situation. And I'm so glad to see more!
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks- I'm glad you enjoyed it, too. :)
Review By [greeniron] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What makes a Hellmouth" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see Faith on the Hellmouth at last. Doesn't look like there will be any trust lost with the scoobies though!
Comments from author:
The Winchesters only really have a problem with the Watchers Council, though- they've come to Sunnydale to save Buffy. So there might be misunderstanding and maybe a few fights, but they probably won't kill each other. Maybe. ;)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 Apr 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Hellmouth" from Cmiller
Review:
Ha...ha...ha that was great, I can't wait to see the clash of the Scoobs and the Winchesters. So I think you should add more asap!!
Comments from author:
Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)
There'll be more soon, I swear... just as soon as I get around to it. ;)
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "What makes a Hellmouth" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm really enjoying this. The first chapter, with Dean saving little Faith, was heart-breaking on all levels, and I love seeing this version of older Faith, with a family to stand behind her.
Comments from author:
Aw, thanks- I'm so glad you're enjoying it.
I always loved the character of Faith and thought she really needed some support in the series and she never got it... so the Winchesters can give it to her and, in return, she'll shake 'em up a little and help re-assess some priorities. ;)
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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