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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from purrfus
Review:
Not into Spiderman, but this looks like it could be a lot of fun. More please.
Comments from author:
lmao, I'm not that into Spiderman either, I was watching the movies cuz I was bored and this popped into my brain. :)
Review By [purrfus] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rob
Review:
Nice origin story. I'd like to see more of this.
Review By [Rob] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yrfgd
Review:
Interesting way for Xander to become a bit more than normal. Looks very like the Spiderman movie version of Spiderman.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Very interesting. Since you list the Marvel cross, the next question would be does the story take place in a version of the MU or does Xander calm down and make the comic book connection himself.
Comments from author:
There is no Marvel comics in this Buffy-verse, so I'm contemplating how much more cross I can do. I'm not intimately familiar with the traditional Marvel canon for any series, so I have to see how it works itself out.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from missinglink
Review:
Just so long as no Spiderman 3 issues arise with emo like Xander or he will be forced to kill himself regardless of any outcry.

Really though, not sure yet about the larger picture you want with this as it is still early on. The intro is decent into how the cross comes about. Would have had more outrage from Angel for being shot in the face by Xander's secretion and Xander's possibly inner monologue at Angel in gay porn. But aside from that it was good on the whole.

Get some more out when you have it and can better judge what you have here. Also we need a timeline of where in canon we are intersecting with. From the sounds of it we could be anywhere from mid season 1 to late season three depending on how one looks at it. Some clarity on that will help. Best of luck. Later.
Comments from author:
I was thinking of having the whole web in the face a running thing for Xander and Angel. Deadboy forgives the first time....but the third fourth and fifth times get him exasperated...and dont worry....the gay porn comment is coming, I was just saving it for further in the story....>.>
Review By [missinglink] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eldude
Review:
So Buffy meets spiderman. Ok, I'm in. Nice to see a take on Xander gets powers without pulling the halloween card. Well written and an interesting concept. I look forward to more.
Comments from author:
Sadly, I've overplayed the YAHF card on myself too many times and am currently bored with the concept....so I thought I'd try something new :3.
Review By [eldude] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from msdarque
Review:
I definitely would love to read more. :D
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AlecMcDowell
Review:
Nice, there are too few SpiderXan fics out there. This was a good start; I like that the hyena was the catalyst here, have to wonder what her presence might do from now on. I'm wondering if Spiderman is the only crossover element you're going to be using- I've always found it a bit odd in fics where that is the case
Review By [AlecMcDowell] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LucyH
Review:
I thought this was rather nifty! I wouldn't mind see how Xander handles being a human plus type and goes about experimenting with what he can do. Not to mention how the rest of the gang will respond to it as well.
Review By [LucyH] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
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