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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from immortalsilence
Review:
ooohhh a dark buffy loving this fic more chapters pretty please
Review By [immortalsilence] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from darkplayer
Review:
Great chapter. I like the whole breakdown of the powers and look forward to what will come from the whole being the incarceration part. Please update again soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice new chapter. Thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from darkplayer
Review:
Awesome story. I like the added background of the slayer creation. I look forward to seeing where it develops from here. Please update soon.
Review By [darkplayer] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from Morgomir
Review:
Great start. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from PATM
Review:
Am I reading the Beings as animal totems? Wolf Eagle Ram Hart sounds close in name to that law firm. Eternal Buffy seems a bit unfair and harsh but the next chapter will be what reveals this story to me as a bash the scoobies story or not. Whedon made some choices to further the story as he saw fit. It's the FF writers job to improve on his choices. Dark and motivated as this one is I like it enough to follow Buffy on this grim adventure.
Comments from author:
somewhere in the series, it was revealed that the law firm of Wolfram & Hart was the base of the operations for the Senior Partners, the opposites of the Powers, who were depicted as The Wolf, The Ram and The Hart. I went with that, and added the Lion, the Eagle and the Bear to represent the Powers in that neutral territory where they were going to be face to face. They have no forms in their own 'space'

Hope you enjoy what follows.
Review By [PATM] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from lunalurker
Review:
Aaaaaaaand I'm hooked! Or at least highly intrigued. More please, and thank you for sharing! :)
Review By [lunalurker] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from Tempi
Review:
An interesting beginning. I look forward to reading what the Powers/Senior Partners solution is.
Review By [Tempi] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from Featherfoot
Review:
Interesting. So i'm guessing that Buffy will be sent to the Xmen universe? Update soon!
Review By [Featherfoot] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This story carries the weight of LAW.

The Law of Unintended Consequences.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part One" from blackgrl
Review:
like I've said before: you do the best edgy-Buffy! once again, you've left me wanting more. well done.
Review By [blackgrl] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from (Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard
Review:
ooh interesting start! can't wait to see where you go with this
Review By [(Recent Donor)SlayerandWereLeopard] • Date [1 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from CageFire
Review:
Interesting fic, I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [CageFire] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
A very darker side to Buffy's resurrection and very interesting. Can't wait to see how the Scoobies handle it when they realize how bad they screwed up and how Buffy will start her new life. Good job.
Comments from author:
thanks
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue, Part Two" from Doodle
Review:
Excellent chapter(s).
Review By [Doodle] • Date [28 Feb 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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