Interesting beginning. I'm really looking forward to more, and while I know that I have no right to say anything like this, i hope that you can update sooner than usual for yourself. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.

I update when I have time to work on things. RL is not friendly towards me sometimes.

... Whoosh! Freak out time in SunnyHell, for EVERYBODY.

Once the truth breaks through and the denial ends, I can't see the Scoobies staying together - too much guilt over what they did for them to be able to function as a team/family anymore. i especially can't see Dawn not ripping them all up for not at least CHECKING to see if Buffy was, in fact, in a Hell dimension, much less leaving her buried - digging herself out of 6 feet of grave would have added to the trauma Buffy was experiencing, so the Demon would have more time to take over.

All the hidden Players are gathering together to send her where, to all intents and purposes, the Demon has no power..... Can't think of many Realities that could be, so now I want your Muse to plop Herself down (gracefully, of course)and Inspire the next 5 chapters to day, please...

:^p