Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - How it all started..." from trongod
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Buffy thinks about getting some training in with Xander... Yeah, right!! She wants the Xander but won't admit it even to herself!
'Course our two Ladies from the Mysterious East won't like that at all; figure Sawyer will make the first offer for a time-share...
Review By [trongod] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - How it all started..." from Omegaprime
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Cool yet bad (in a good way) backstory on how Xander got there and got noticed by his new bosses.
Buffy is noticing him as well, not sure how that will turn out.
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5 - How it all started..." from Rob
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Giles has got to be real curious. :)
Review By [Rob] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from Omegaprime
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Ha, Xander freaked everyone out except Oz, I guess being a werewolf has its advantages.
Willow is questioning her past actions and is worried.
But I wonder how Xander got to Roanapur in the first place? Is Buffy and co. going to ask that one?
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from eriktheviking
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A great look at Xander being Xander no matter where he is. And an unexpected but welcome Willow actually thinking for her self, and what can be said for her blondness, great fun, thanks.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from Teucrian
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Quite interesting. Keep the occasional flashback coming, they make for a nice way to slide some exposition or character development in on the sly.
Review By [Teucrian] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from JediKnight
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Very interesting job on the story, I hope to read more soon.
-Any plans in mentioning how Xander got to Roanapur?
-Will the Lagoon Company show up in Sunnydale?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [13 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from trongod
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Liked Willow's epiphany that she's lost herself being Buffy's shadow, and might have come closer than she realized to losing Xander entirely. The Sawyer flashback was pure Xander, and I still vote for the two Ladies From Hell On Earth reaching an agreement to share Xander rather than allowing any of the Sunnydale fems a chance at him....
C'mon, please? Pretty please??
Review By [trongod] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from TheHarlequin
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Holy mother this fic is off the chain!!!! I love it!!!!!! Keep up the good work!
Review By [TheHarlequin] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from maddog
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Good story. I like how you have had Willow hit by a clue by four about her actions. Enjoy your game and update when you can.
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from CrystalBlaze
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It happens. The gaming taking a bite, I mean. Also, I can believe the laid-back predator that is Oz accepting Xander at face value.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from Omegaprime
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Hehehe, the cat's really out of the bag now and now the Scooby gang will see the dark side of Xander.
LOL
Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from HieiUchiha
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I totally had to rate you as a 10 just for the simple fact you used Black Lagoon, totally love that anime! Lol, anyways, good story so far, though I truly hope that Xander gets the chance to kick a bit of ass in that in your face, John Woo/gun-fu/bullet ballet kinda way Roanpur is totally famous for, lol...personally, I think Xander wielding a heavy caliber hand gun and sword or sawed off double barrel shotgun would be ridiculously sweet...! Lol, anyways, good story so far and can't wait to see what else happens!
Review By [HieiUchiha] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]