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Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from maddog
Review:
Good story. I like how you have had Willow hit by a clue by four about her actions. Enjoy your game and update when you can.
Review By [maddog] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4 - Semi-Tense Introductions." from CrystalBlaze
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It happens. The gaming taking a bite, I mean. Also, I can believe the laid-back predator that is Oz accepting Xander at face value.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [11 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from Omegaprime
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Hehehe, the cat's really out of the bag now and now the Scooby gang will see the dark side of Xander.

LOL

Keep up the good work.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [10 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from HieiUchiha
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I totally had to rate you as a 10 just for the simple fact you used Black Lagoon, totally love that anime! Lol, anyways, good story so far, though I truly hope that Xander gets the chance to kick a bit of ass in that in your face, John Woo/gun-fu/bullet ballet kinda way Roanpur is totally famous for, lol...personally, I think Xander wielding a heavy caliber hand gun and sword or sawed off double barrel shotgun would be ridiculously sweet...! Lol, anyways, good story so far and can't wait to see what else happens!
Review By [HieiUchiha] • Date [9 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from trongod
Review:
Minor grammatical errors, but overall excellent!

Would like to see the two Roanpur Ladies (R. L., Tm, patent pending) team up to share Xander while denying the obviously clueless and tasteless Sunnydale women their piece of the Xander action... Except Joyce, assuming she's still around... She IS still around, right? (puppy eyes) Just think of the fun you can have adding MILF Joyce to the mix, first as Xander's psuedo mom who 'adopts' the newest additions to the fight, then the R. L. (Tm) decide she desperately needs what Xander has...
Review By [trongod] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from CrystalBlaze
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I get the feeling that Ripper's coven heard of (and was intimidated by) Roanapur back in the day.

I mean, geez! Geese Howard would be.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written introduction some more of the characters from Black Lagoon, but the meeting between the two groups seemed a little forced especially as college would have started.
Comments from author:
Yeah well, I said in my AN's it felt a little rushed so I'm not surprised that it seems that way to some. To be honest it kind of seems that way to me...>
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from JediKnight
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Very good work on the the update, I hope to read more soon.

-Is there a pairing in this?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from Stormrider
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One thing I gotta say is I'm hooked on this. Interesting that some of Xander Roanapur friends, and from what I'm gathering, Xander roommates, are now in Sunnydale. Sawyer going to town in Roanapur, I don't know but suddenly I feel very sorry for the vamps and demon population in Sunnydale. Love the flashback too, not too many people can say they faced Revy in one of her moods and lived to tell about it. I can count on one hand the people who survived Revy when she's in a mood like that. I also like Shenhua's attraction to Xander, he's notorious for attracting some dangerous women. Shenhua is definitely a woman who can keep Xander in line, and Sawyer, Lotton and Xander are just partners in crime. I love to see flashback to see what hi jinks those four happened to them.

Now the cat's out of the bag. Giles knows how dangerous Roanapur is, and Buffy and Co, will know soon enough, their reactions will be fun to watch. Love to see what happens next keep it up
Review By [Stormrider] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3 - Hands! Watch the Hands!" from Rob
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“Roanapur.” At this Giles just blinked for a few seconds before snatching his glasses off his face and rubbing the bridge of his nose.

“Oh, bloody hell..!”


Oh, this is going to be good!
Review By [Rob] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from Selias
Review:
Good fic so far. I haven't watched Black Lagoon, but this seems like it's going to be a good read.
Review By [Selias] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from cwolf
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Yeah.. that makes sense. The members aren't exactly good guys. But who wants the world to end? In that type of situation, they'll do something if only to protect themselves and their bosses. Or in this case, protect Xander heh.
Comments from author:
As a rule I need to be a bit silly when I write. If I can make it all make sense though that is a bonus ^^.
Review By [cwolf] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from Omegaprime
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This is getting interesting, hope Willow doesn't find a wanted list on the internet that shows him on it.

Poor Xander, this has many ways of exploding in his face.
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from JediKnight
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Pretty interesting so far, I hope to read more soon.
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [7 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from eriktheviking
Review:
I like the storyline development, a low key build-up without being boring is something unusual in BtVS.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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