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Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from MathiasBlue
Review:
Got to say this looks awesome. Please update regularly ^-^
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from Rob
Review:
Poor Xander, clashing lives isn't pretty. :)
Review By [Rob] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 - Unexpected Visitors and a Good Lunch." from maddog
Review:
I like it but boy does it have a multitude of ways to go explosively south at a moments notice. Good work.
Review By [maddog] • Date [6 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from Omegaprime
Review:
Ok, this is interesting so far, even though I have to find out what this anime is about now.

Keep it up.

(Ok, I looked up the three characters Xander was mentioned with and all I got to say is yikes. Trust Xander to find strong yet crazy people.)

Crazy question: Does he have his own bounty on his head or is on a wanted poster?
Review By [Omegaprime] • Date [5 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from trongod
Review:
I like this; further chapters detailing just HOW Xander wound up in the deep end of the pool like that, more on the Roommates From A Lighter Side Of Hell (the image of his wake up call cracked me up) and maybe some of their barhopping episodes; a guided tour of the Hellmouth for Xander's 'guests' and the reaction of Giles & Co. - especially of a couple of ladies of Xander's acquaintance heard about Balalaika's road trip and decided to make sure their naive American pet wasn't going to get hurt....

And the further reactions of Cordelia and the girls as suddenly these exotic beauties appear and drape themselves over THEIR Xander while having the audacity to ignore them...
Comments from author:
To be honest I don't know how I'm going to explain just how Xander ended up in Roanapur to begin with let alone taking jobs from the two biggest fish there. For now let's just say 'he just did' and leave at that. I have some ideas but they need to be fleshed out before I can even think of putting them on paper. As to the girls respective reactions well, I'm working on that to.
Review By [trongod] • Date [3 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from Blackfang
Review:
this story sounds freaking awesome...i can't wait for more
Review By [Blackfang] • Date [3 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from eriktheviking
Review:
A very well written demonstration of what happens when you find the ability to survive in such a treacherous hole.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from Rob
Review:
Very nice start, MOAR! please. :)
Review By [Rob] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - What happens in... Roanapur?" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Had no idea who the supporting cast were, so the flashback was less meaningful. I would like to find out how Xander found himself in another part of the world. I like the AU ripples, but wasn't really sure if Xander had been in an alternate reality due to a wish or something.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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