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Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from Tariq
Review:
Good to see another chapter.

I look forward to seeing how you're going to build what is essentially a whole new world. And as interesting as it is so far I find myself wondering what's the story? Is it just throw Xander into a new world, for which I hope this becomes a long term project with the world fleshed out, or do you have a more specific story in mind? And please tell me if the tease of a possible New York Cordelia will be fulfilled.
Comments from author:
To be honest, it is a long term project where I just see where it goes. Myself and my beta have been shooting ideas back and forth on where to go with it, and I'm doing chapters in-between other projects I'm working on.

While I will admit that the beginning isn't as exciting as I'd like, I like to get the back story and the little stuff out of the way. That's so I can move on to better things, and get to the action.

It would be interesting to see the Cordy of this world, but getting Xander to the other side of the continent would take some time. I'll see what happens.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Tariq] • Date [21 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Zephyrdh
Review:
Is this a crossover with something I don't know? because it´s not ringing any bells.
Comments from author:
No, this an almost completely original story. I borrowed the super-fuel 'imulsion' from the Gears of War games. Other then that, there is no crossover at this time.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [Zephyrdh] • Date [16 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from Tariq
Review:
Glad to see another chapter,
but come on please and write them faster.
Loving the story but hating to rhyme,
I'll be writing another review a different time.
Comments from author:
The time between chapters, is simply that I have multiple stories I'm working on right now. I'd like to put them out more regularly, but it's just not possible right now.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Tariq] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Intersting.

I don't know the game, but it's a good start.

Raf
Comments from author:
It's not actually a game. Imulsion is the super-fuel from the game 'Gears of War'. I simply used it to facilitate the huge differences between Xander's dimension, and the one he ended up in.

It'll be explained more clearly in future chapters, thank you for the review.
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written rotten situation for Xander.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I can't seem to let him ever be happy in any of the situations I seem to put him in. On the bright side, I'd take a miserable Xander story over a happy B/A or B/S any day.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xon
Review:
You write like this is a GEARS OF WAR crossover...
Comments from author:
It's not, I just needed something bigger then oil to make the world into what I had envisioned. Imulsion simply fit the bill. I do have a Gears crossover if you're interested though, check out my story 'Headhunters'.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [xon] • Date [8 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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