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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kimera
Review:
The story is all right, but the only problem I have is that you have to explain how Kate made Buffy and Faith back down. For Kate to do that she has to be more powerful than Glory (Hell Goddess), Darth Rosenberg, and the First Evil. I hope you have a good explanation for that scene.

VR/ Kimera
Comments from author:
I think I said they took a step backward, not that they backed down, necessarily. The way I see it is that it's not that Kate is more powerful- it's not about power. It's about Kate being more sure of herself, if that makes sense? That she's a grown up; she's not a girl, she's a woman and that confidence carries across into her as a Slayer- so it's not her Slayer side that's necessarily more powerful, it's her human side being very strong.

If that even makes sense?

Thanks for reading and reviewing, and I hope that wasn't even more confusing... :D
Review By [Kimera] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Rating [5 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Paintsy
Review:
I love a strong woman, and you don't have to be a slayer to be one. Very nice chapter/story, I'm off to see if you have anymore, keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
That's pretty much what I was going for here- it doesn't matter if Kate is or is not a Slayer; she's still a strong character and well able to look after herself.
Its a problem that I have with the BTVS verse, sometimes, that the female characters are all super-something toward the final seasons- that's why I like the character of Beckett on Castle, because she's a regular woman and she's still a kick-ass, take no prisoners kind of person.

Thanks for reading and reviewing- much appreciated. :)
Review By [Paintsy] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DancyerMcCoy
Review:
More please.
Comments from author:
Hmm... I'm not sure there'll be more but I'm glad you want it? (If that makes sense?)

There may be another one-shot or two out there in the future, but I have nothing planned right now so I'll make no promises.

Thanks for reading! :)
Review By [DancyerMcCoy] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Very nice story. I thought you did a good job on Kate, Alex, and Vi. But you can't leave it just at this story. I have so many frakking questions! Please write more of Slayer Kate's backstory.
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing- I'm glad you enjoyed it!

There might be more in the form of one-shots, but I don't have anything planned at the moment so I won't promise anything.

That said, in my mind Det. Beckett is out there nightly, patrolling the streets of NYC, searching for evil. :)
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
and another Mary Sue shows up. Boring.

I really dislike stories that are all about showing up Buffy or other slayers.

OK KATE have you faced an apocalypse- multiple times?
HAVE YOU died, gone to heaven and been pulled out?
HAD to kill your soulmate?
Had to fight BY YOURSELF hundreds of times for your life?

Until then you are NOTHING vs any of the senior slayers.
Comments from author:
I respectfully disagree- I think Beckett is an excellent hero, Slayer or not.

If there are Mary Sue elements, please point them out to me. I thought I'd kept the Castle characters in-character. If there are aspects that I can work on, I would appreciate your constructive criticism.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from kaleecat
Review:
Oh I liked this. I can perfectly visualize the scene & can completely see Kate as a hidden Slayer. Great to see Buffy & the others witness that they're not necessarily the strongest. Much fun. Thanks for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reading and reviewing- I'm glad you enjoyed it!

That was my aim for this fic- to illustrate a character (or two) that I believe would have made for an excellent Slayer... but who didn't need to be a Slayer to be smart, capable and good at her job. :)
Review By [kaleecat] • Date [12 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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