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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from chaggett
Review:
The stargate was found on the Giza Plateau - west bank of the Nile in Egypt.
Comments from author:
I wrote Gaza didn't I, sigh, I'll be going back and fixing it. Thanks for the heads up.

Edit: Nope I got it right.
Review By [chaggett] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Addlcove
Review:
great to see an update, hope there is more comming.
Comments from author:
There is, it might be a bit, but it's coming.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DarthPayne
Review:
Hmm, i'd have thought that David would have some kind of reaction to both the Stargate and the fact that it was found in Israel.
Comments from author:
You're thinking of the Gaza strip. Giza is where the Great Pyrimid is. Ziva is of course impressed, along with everyone else (Except for Abby, she's happy she's fifty bucks richer at Tony's expense.) I'll be dealing with the other character's dealing in later chapters.
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from DrDamage
Review:
It's wonderful to see this one back from the dead...

I apologize for the truly awful unintentional (I swear!) double entendre.

I just couldn't help leaving it in once I realized what I had done. ;)

I hope we'll be seeing more of this story in the not too distant.
Comments from author:
Can't guarentee a quick update for this, I have several stories that are nearing posting point. It was never dead, none of my stories ever really are, and I do have plans on continueing it after this one is done. Next up will be chapter 9 of New Places.
Review By [DrDamage] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from AllenPitt
Review:
I'd love to know what cover story they come up with to explain her being alive. Kidnapped by terrorists and replaced by a look-alike, who was then killed? Only now freed from captivity? It'd almost be true...
Or they could just shrug and say they haven't a clue. Big mystery. All sorts of wild theories will come out, none of them remotely close to the truth...
Comments from author:
No comment right now, though it may be revealed in the next chapter.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [22 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
So............. i finally got around to reading all of this... which can only mean that you're way overdue for the next chapter! Nowish, please. I really do hope you haven't run out of story because I'm in withdrawal.

Peace,

blue
Comments from author:
Sorry to take so long to get back to you Blue. But Chapter 3 is next up after New Places 8.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [9 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Blackett
Review:
loved it
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [Blackett] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from skychan
Review:
Well now, this is getting interesting. Certainly you have hit your stride with this chapter as things have begun to move, and rather quickly at that. I have always enjoyed Loki's interference and this is just one more bit of fun with it.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [skychan] • Date [5 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Oddshot
Review:
Just read the 1st two Chapters of this interesting start to what I for see to be hopefully a great story .

Can't wait for more updates .
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, hope I don't disapoint.
Review By [Oddshot] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and explained twist.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from MarcusRowland
Review:
That's an interesting twist. Was it you that wrote a story in which Tara survives that way?

later:

http://www.tthfanfic.org/Story-18856/jedibuttercup+More+Jean+Grey+Less+Wolverine.htm
Comments from author:
Thank you. No, that wasn't me, if you happen to find it could you shoot me a link? It sounds like it might be interesting.

The only idea I tend to reuse is a portal dumping the Scoobies into another universe.
Review By [MarcusRowland] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from PATM
Review:
I'm relishing the return of Caitlin through Loki's last positive act. It's so complicated! But interesting.
Comments from author:
Thanks
Review By [PATM] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from norgco
Review:
Good part, please continue.

I get this image of O'Neill trying to explain the situation and Gibb's cop instincts getting in the way:

"So O'Neill, let me see if I have this straight." The ex-Marine said. "The species that cloned Kate left you all their knowledge, the greatest storehouse of information in the universe, worth more money that Earth has, and then committed suicide."

"Uh, yeah." The General stated.

"The will was verbal and not recorded so you have no proof of transfer of legal ownership , just a lot of corpses surrounding the loot that you walked off with."

"Uh, well we didn't actually see the bodies or anything..."

Gibbs glared at the Airforce officer for a moment.

"You know Gibbs I once sent a guy up for twenty to life with a better story than that." Tony added helpfully.
Comments from author:
Not quite what I have planned for the conversation, but you did give me some things to think about.

Thanks for the review, and the laugh.
Review By [norgco] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from BARON
Review:
really enjoying your wonderful story please continue it.
Comments from author:
So I am planning. Glad you are enjoying it.
Review By [BARON] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from littleoldme
Review:
I'm really loving this! You've got Gibbs, Tony, and Abby down flat, and poor Kate is in such a unique situation! I can't wait to see her interact with Ziva a bit more... and to see what O'Neill's suggestion is about what to do next!
Comments from author:
Glad you are enjoying it. Thanks for the review.
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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