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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Cordyfan
Review:
Interesting start - and I always preferred Kate to Ziva, for some reason.

Could this be Asgard cloning by any chance?
Comments from author:
Maybe?

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Cordyfan] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Intense... Parallel universe, slightly slower time-wise than where she found herself??

But that begs the question of how -or What - moved her from one to the other....

Excellently done withe the characterizations of all the people.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.

Nope, no parallel universes.
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from burmafrdnow
Review:
Chaos Theory is almost exactly like this as regards the start.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review.
Review By [burmafrdnow] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
You fic was good,
All the word and lines understood,
I hope to see more,
Can't wait to see what you have in store. And that's the limit of my rhyming. Keep up the good work, loved it. :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you liked it, forgot it was rhyming review day when I posted.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [15 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from xon
Review:
Not a crossover, but still sci-fi;
There's more than what meets the eye.
Kate Todd, gone these many years,
Gibbs and the Gang, many tears.

Her sister revealed recently;
A psychiatric analyst.
Conflict and impossibility, flatly;
... someone's a somnambulist?
Comments from author:
Close xon.

Thanks for the rhymming review.
Review By [xon] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bill
Review:
Great start! Love to see what Kate makes of the new team dynamic.
Comments from author:
Hardest part of the story to plot out.

Glad you liked it.
Review By [Bill] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HarmMarie
Review:
The words before have passed in a blur,
I can not believe it really is her.
I must simply wait for you to affirm.
My mind is open, my heart full of hope,
And please, dear author, say this isn't a joke.
Comments from author:
Nope, no joke.

Thanks for the rhymming review.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Malu
Review:
So far it's a very nice story! As I see it there are two possibilities: either Willow had an "oopsie" and pulled Kate out of an alternate reality, or there is a (Stargate) dimensional mirror in play somwhere. If there is another reason I am very curious.
Comments from author:
This is a non-Buffy cross, on the other hand you did peg the other universe involved, though not what happened.
Review By [Malu] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Like it so far, but why is it classified as a non-crossover? Might want to fix that.
Comments from author:
The author screwed up is the main one. It's the first non-Buffy story I've done, and I missed the Miscellaneous section when I was looking through the choices, well didn't miss it, didn't think what I was looking for would be in it.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
Interesting start looking forward to see where you take this.
Comments from author:
Hope I don't disappoint.
Review By [war] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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