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Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from PATM
Review:
Awesome story! Knee in the jewels for dissing the woman, no surprise to me.
Comments from author:
Sato didn't exactly diss her - Joyce merely reacted to a threat in the only way she knows how for the moment.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from annararen
Review:
With some work you could turn this into an original space saga :)
I wouldn't mind buying a book with a story such as this.

So far, this has been an excellent read!
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [annararen] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter!

I can't wait for Diana's reaction to the brown-nosing sycophancy of an Imperial formal event.
Comments from author:
Faith/Diana might enjoyy it more than she thinks - but not because of the sycophants. Drayana has not time for those, anyway... Thanks for the review.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
outstanding read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from grd
Review:
Best thing to ever happen to Faith/Diana. Not the medal but family. Looking forward to Earth and Joyce hearing each others exploits. Faith's role now may mean a great deal for Earth getting an alliance with a very powerful a alien force to challenge the Goauld. Loving it all.
Comments from author:
I haven't yet figured out how - or if - the Tallurans will remain in contact with Earth, but being effectively accepted as family is a fitting reward for Faith.

Thanks for the review - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from Oxnate
Review:
A bit slow but I can see good set up for future conflicts. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Can't have an epic space battle in every chapter... ;-) This story's as much about a developing bond between the humans and Tallurans (especially Dawn and Drayana) as anything else, so it will have parts that are slower-paced.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Recent Donor)betascud
Review:
"Squeee". Double update (this and Fate's Plaything). So maybe rather a double here: "Squee, squee". Of course a totally manly squee ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks for your manly double-squee! ;-)

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Oo. Two chapters on one day? Must be my lucky day.
I like your resourceful pirate!
Comments from author:
Not sure there's much to like about Jugrub - though he certainly is resourceful! Unfortunately, he'll probably end up wriggling on the end of someone's sword - though not for a while yet and not before he's done a great deal more mischief.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...! Lovely bit with the "Aunt Joyce" (and especially the discovery that Joyce carries what the SGC would only later discover and learn to call the Ancient Technology Activation gene -- what an intriguing list of possibilities that opens up!).
Comments from author:
I thought it might be interesting to take the whole ATA-gene thing in a different direction. With the Tallurans around, there are probably implications for Atlantis, too (they have more right to the city, after all) but I'll leave that for the sequel!

As for the Aunt Joyce part, it gets a little more syrupy in the next chapter, too...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Awwwwwww - Aunt Joyce - love it!
Comments from author:
If you like that, the next chpater might get unbearably sugary and cutesy (but in a different direction).

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter!

So glad Drayana is alive and well.

And I wonder where you're going with Joyce having the Ancient gene?
Comments from author:
I'm not saying where I'm going with the Ancient gene thing for now, but it will have an impact further down the line.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from Rich
Review:
I'm enjoying this whole series. It's nice to see SpecOps Cordelia realizing her potential (no pun intended), and you're doing a good job with the other characters as well ( in spite of their unreasonable fear of being spanked - would a Slayer really be afraid of a hairbrush ?). It will be interested to see if Buffy really gets into her role as an investigator and leader.

As to this story, you've done an excellent job capturing the "feel" of the original Stargate series, with some old fashioned space opera thrown in. Faith gets more impressive with every chapter. Adding the Furlings is just icing on the cake. In short, a good job all around.
Comments from author:
Thanks for this - glad you enjoyed it. I thought I'd try to spin something out of the Furlings, a race that was never explored in Stargate SG-1, beyond a few mentions.
Review By [Rich] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from NorthernOil
Review:
Really sorry that I have not reviewed the last few chapters, been kinda busy with that "W" word. I'll just say that excellent and engrossing don't go far enough to describe your stories.
Damn Good and I really enjoy seeing the email that there is an update for one of your stories!
Comments from author:
The W-word has also been a pain for me recently (more hours, more responsibility, same pay - but at least I got to keep my job, which might not have been the case if I'd refused the "promotion"),

Anyhow, writing is keeping me sane at a particularly busy period.

Thanks for the review - glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [NorthernOil] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from (Current Donor)vidicon
Review:
Interesting diplomatic developments here. I get the impression that nobody really likes the Xiccavar, and that the Ch'anis are even more generally despised. The Talluran reaction is probablya a proportional response. Poor Dawn running into a walking nightmare. And Poor Drayana feeling guilty. And happily Joyce is willing to accept a niece. I wonder if Drayana is aware of the arrangement between her tutor and guardian.

A lot of development. thank you for writing.
Comments from author:
Nobody really likes - or trusts - anyone. Some species are quite aggressive, others underhanded. of course, the Ch'Hanis, given that they essentially regard the galaxy as an all-you-can-eat buffet, are especially feared and disliked.

The Talluran response was somewhat more than proportional - they've effectively taken a major player out of the game for some years, while the Xicavvar action on Thenatrix and its colonies was proportionately only a pinprick to the Tallurans. It was simply essential in diplomatic terms that they responded so forcefully.

Dawn and Drayana may still find that there are differences to work around, in terms of their world (or galaxy) view, but hopefully nothing that will get in the way of their friendship.

Joyce indeed has an honorary niece, so Dawn and her sisters now have a new cousin. Now all Drayana needs is a way to continue the relationship from several galaxies away...

Drayana may or may not be aware of the arrangement (I haven't decided) but would be happy for them - just so long as they officially adopted her, too.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Current Donor)vidicon] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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