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Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Oh, you actually didn't let the talluran flagship be boarded :(
However, nice idea with the drill. And sending the poor Centurion shopping with Dawn, that's evil.

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
It'll be a little while before there's another full-blown space-battle, I'm afraid.

Forcing Vesarian to shop with Dawn seemed like a fitting punishment.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from Oxnate
Review:
Ahh. Thank you for taking a reasoned and thoughtful approach to the "Slayers can't kill people" BS. I cringe every time I read a story saying that they go crazy if they ever take a life.
Comments from author:
I'm not saying that Slayers don't have some sort of imperative against taking life - canon sent mixed messages on this. What I'm suggesting is that it firstly isn't the only factor at work; secondly, that it varies from Slayer to Slayer; and thirdly, depends on circumstances.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from FireWolfe
Review:
I so love the way you have Faith working her issues out. I love this story it is a great companion piece to the other stories. I love the development of all the characters. The only issue I have is Dr.Lamb was in the Air Force on the show. However that is a minor point to me. I just hope you develop Buffy in the other stories as well as you have Joyce, Faith and Dawn. I love the characters who have taken them in. The punishment for the centurion is cruel and unusual. No one should ever have to shop with a summers woman lol.
Fire
Comments from author:
Cruel and unusual maybe - but no more than he deserved for scaring the crap out of Dawn!

I'm not so sure Lam was a USAF doctor. Unlike Janet Fraiser, we never hear her being referred to by rank in the series, or see her wearing a uniform, while it's never stated whether or not she was a civilian doctor or not. Also, she didn't tend to use "sir" when addressing senior officers - which is very telling. On the basis of these, I'm inclined to regard her as a civilian employee of the SGC.

Thanks for the review - glad you're still enjoying it.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from ShalaDakiri
Review:
Good to see Faith is working through her issues. Why do I have a feeling she'll return to Earth a lot better adjusted than when she left?

I agree that, while it was probably a valuable lesson for Drayana, having Dawn caught unaware wasn't the brightest move. At least it turned out to be a drill, not a real attack.
Comments from author:
Faith will certainly be better adjusted after this experience. The Centurions certainly made an error of judgement and Vesarian perhaps better hope that he isn't scheduled to spar with Faith anytime soon...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [ShalaDakiri] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from (Recent Donor)betascud
Review:
I was about to say that quite a lot have happened in the few WEEKS that Terrans had been there... But then I read the part where it was all just a drill ;)

Keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Funny you should say that. Last chapter, one reviewer said that it was going a little slowly... Don't worry, I'm not about to kick off another interstellar war at this early point.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Trials and Imperial Tribulations" from harcroft
Review:
Helia Tren is proving to be an interesting character.I assume that by the fact that a fair amount of "screentime"( as you might call it) is being given to her, Helia Tren isn't going to die. ( otherwise, I'd have thought you wouldn't mention her so much.) Why do I get the feeling Diana's going to be involved in her survival? ( either as an example of how a death can be faked, or to talk Helia round to the Plea of Mercy. After all, if anyone can do it, it would be the woman who'se had almost the same crisis of confidence.)

I will admit to being surprised at the Imperial Guard Centurion's behaviour, too. at the very least, why not warn Dawn, and find some way to keep Dawn from telling Drayana?
Comments from author:
I haven't yet decided what to do with Helia Tren, but as Ilarius' interest suggests, the implications may go a little further. I hadn't thought about using Faith/Diana - thanks for the idea.

The Imperial Guard won't make that mistake again - or anything else that even makes Dawn slightly nervous.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [harcroft] • Date [26 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from Alkeni
Review:
Another very excellent chapter, and I eagerly await more.
Comments from author:
Glad you enjoyed it - thanks for the review.
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [25 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Plots within plots within plots. Another great chapter in a great story and great series.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm trying to make the story at least as much about intrigue and plotting, as centred on action.
Review By [(Recent Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from Mordare
Review:
I love this story. You have given all the characters a nice sense of depth. The whole galaxy you have created is very well thought out. I also like how Faith is evolving. Easily one of my favorite stories so far.
Comments from author:
Faith will continue to evolve and I'm also still developing my pet galaxy...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very apt title, and I love all the affirmations of family (especially the family you choose for yourself, as well as those family members who just happen to fall into your lap along the way, so to speak!).
Comments from author:
Thanks - I was afraid this one might get a tad syrupy, but can't have space battles and rampaging aliens every day after all... :-)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from PATM
Review:
Awesome story! Knee in the jewels for dissing the woman, no surprise to me.
Comments from author:
Sato didn't exactly diss her - Joyce merely reacted to a threat in the only way she knows how for the moment.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from annararen
Review:
With some work you could turn this into an original space saga :)
I wouldn't mind buying a book with a story such as this.

So far, this has been an excellent read!
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [annararen] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter!

I can't wait for Diana's reaction to the brown-nosing sycophancy of an Imperial formal event.
Comments from author:
Faith/Diana might enjoyy it more than she thinks - but not because of the sycophants. Drayana has not time for those, anyway... Thanks for the review.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
outstanding read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from grd
Review:
Best thing to ever happen to Faith/Diana. Not the medal but family. Looking forward to Earth and Joyce hearing each others exploits. Faith's role now may mean a great deal for Earth getting an alliance with a very powerful a alien force to challenge the Goauld. Loving it all.
Comments from author:
I haven't yet figured out how - or if - the Tallurans will remain in contact with Earth, but being effectively accepted as family is a fitting reward for Faith.

Thanks for the review - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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