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Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan
Review:
Plots within plots within plots. Another great chapter in a great story and great series.
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. I'm trying to make the story at least as much about intrigue and plotting, as centred on action.
Review By [(Current Donor)SamuraiCatFan] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from Mordare
Review:
I love this story. You have given all the characters a nice sense of depth. The whole galaxy you have created is very well thought out. I also like how Faith is evolving. Easily one of my favorite stories so far.
Comments from author:
Faith will continue to evolve and I'm also still developing my pet galaxy...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Very apt title, and I love all the affirmations of family (especially the family you choose for yourself, as well as those family members who just happen to fall into your lap along the way, so to speak!).
Comments from author:
Thanks - I was afraid this one might get a tad syrupy, but can't have space battles and rampaging aliens every day after all... :-)
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [12 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from PATM
Review:
Awesome story! Knee in the jewels for dissing the woman, no surprise to me.
Comments from author:
Sato didn't exactly diss her - Joyce merely reacted to a threat in the only way she knows how for the moment.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [PATM] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from annararen
Review:
With some work you could turn this into an original space saga :)
I wouldn't mind buying a book with a story such as this.

So far, this has been an excellent read!
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [annararen] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter!

I can't wait for Diana's reaction to the brown-nosing sycophancy of an Imperial formal event.
Comments from author:
Faith/Diana might enjoyy it more than she thinks - but not because of the sycophants. Drayana has not time for those, anyway... Thanks for the review.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)vladt
Review:
outstanding read, thank you.
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [(Current Donor)vladt] • Date [9 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from grd
Review:
Best thing to ever happen to Faith/Diana. Not the medal but family. Looking forward to Earth and Joyce hearing each others exploits. Faith's role now may mean a great deal for Earth getting an alliance with a very powerful a alien force to challenge the Goauld. Loving it all.
Comments from author:
I haven't yet figured out how - or if - the Tallurans will remain in contact with Earth, but being effectively accepted as family is a fitting reward for Faith.

Thanks for the review - glad you're enjoying it.
Review By [grd] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from Oxnate
Review:
A bit slow but I can see good set up for future conflicts. Looking forward to more.
Comments from author:
Can't have an epic space battle in every chapter... ;-) This story's as much about a developing bond between the humans and Tallurans (especially Dawn and Drayana) as anything else, so it will have parts that are slower-paced.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Recent Donor)betascud
Review:
"Squeee". Double update (this and Fate's Plaything). So maybe rather a double here: "Squee, squee". Of course a totally manly squee ;)
Comments from author:
Thanks for your manly double-squee! ;-)

Glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Recent Donor)betascud] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from (Current Donor)Blackswordzero
Review:
Good chapter.
Comments from author:
Thanks - glad you enjoyed it.
Review By [(Current Donor)Blackswordzero] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Blood Bonds and Blood Vengeance" from LordSchmodder
Review:
Oo. Two chapters on one day? Must be my lucky day.
I like your resourceful pirate!
Comments from author:
Not sure there's much to like about Jugrub - though he certainly is resourceful! Unfortunately, he'll probably end up wriggling on the end of someone's sword - though not for a while yet and not before he's done a great deal more mischief.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [LordSchmodder] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from RevDorothyL
Review:
Awww...! Lovely bit with the "Aunt Joyce" (and especially the discovery that Joyce carries what the SGC would only later discover and learn to call the Ancient Technology Activation gene -- what an intriguing list of possibilities that opens up!).
Comments from author:
I thought it might be interesting to take the whole ATA-gene thing in a different direction. With the Tallurans around, there are probably implications for Atlantis, too (they have more right to the city, after all) but I'll leave that for the sequel!

As for the Aunt Joyce part, it gets a little more syrupy in the next chapter, too...

Thanks for the review.
Review By [RevDorothyL] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
Awwwwwww - Aunt Joyce - love it!
Comments from author:
If you like that, the next chpater might get unbearably sugary and cutesy (but in a different direction).

Thanks for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Diplomacy and a Measured Punitive Response" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Great chapter!

So glad Drayana is alive and well.

And I wonder where you're going with Joyce having the Ancient gene?
Comments from author:
I'm not saying where I'm going with the Ancient gene thing for now, but it will have an impact further down the line.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [28 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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