More Irish than Jamaican? HAHAHA! That kind of struck me as funny. Glad to see that the story is still alive and kicking. I really thought that Xander would have identified himself by now. As for Sir Integra...I think she needs to be knocked off of her high horse every now and then.
Review By [kayron] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Sorry for the messed question. Let me repeat. What would happen with a Slayer, if she were to die by a demonic/devil weapon, and said Slayer ALSO was of Devil blood, even if only a quarter, she being unaware of it? She would just die, or the mix of the slayer spirit leaving would trigger a Devil Awakening?
It would be quite the odd factor with Kendra or Faith. .. Kendra being stabbed with a weapon that Spike stole from somewhere, only to bring her Devil blood into full awakening, and turning her from an Slayer, into an half-breed Devil...
Comments from author:
Hmm, interesting question...is this for a story your writing?
From what i have learned from the DMC games, for all intents and pruposes Devil heritage is awakened from birth, slowly taking hold of the indivual until they fully come into their power. That is the impression the as of yet to be released DmC game points to.
If we are going with the whims of an author than they could very well do what they like, though devil arms do not let anyone wield them, the user must subjugate the devil before their souls take form and bind themselves to the user.
I hope i made sense to you if not let me know since this is a rather interesting question.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
excellent story...cliffy at the end and its been a few months since you updated..you are evil!!!!...LOL...get around to it when ya can mate
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For a neta...Greywizard if he aint swamped..he may well have great ideas for others
Comments from author:
Actually the chapter is ready however i am looking for a beta reader since my usual one is out for hardware issues. I´m currently looking for a temporary back up, can you recommend anyone?
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
You have a great plot with lots of potential here, but you need to concentrate on keeping the same tense. Sometimes you are past tense "...he said." other times you are present tense "...he says." Sometimes in the same paragraph. It is very frustrating to try to read. Past tense is generally more comfortable to read, but please pick one and stick with it.
Totally awesome job and I can't wait to see what else happens! Though, a few more training montages wouldn't hurt and perhaps seeing more of what Xander could do magically wouldn't hurt. Personally, I would think that since his empowerment Xander would probably try to see if he can go beyond the confines of the magicks and abilities he gained from halloween and into more traditional forms of spell casting..I wouldn't think he could get Willow status, but I definitely see the potential for his threat level to raise, if he was able to use more than just his familiars, perhaps body enhancement magicks, shielding and various force based effects(ie: telekinesis, flame/ice/electricity/sonic/acid/force blasts/rays/walls/etc), enchantments, etc....Still an awesome story and definitely on the look out, however you do it...!
Review By [HieiUchiha] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Xander is the most flexible if not necessarily the most creative and would do best with ice or flash powers. Willow is definitely the most creative of the three and would likely do best with the ice powers but you could mix it up and have Xander get both ice and flash by having him swipe a piece of Willow's ice costume just before the spell triggered. I love how you had him sense the police girl. More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [15 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
