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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
The more you write, the better it gets so keep up the good work! Besides, the ideas at the base of the work are more important, in my opinion, than the grammar, at least in the beginning. Grammar skills can be improved or supplemented by hard work and a good editor. Drop me a line. No notion how fast I will get it back to you but I can definitely clean it up.
Comments from author:
Will talk to you soon, i warn you in advance the next chapter was by far the biggest nightmare i have takled in my career...
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [13 Aug 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Very nice. But Xander is going to so get his butt kicked when Buffy and Willow find out he is Hunter.

It's not going to be pretty.

Great Story, Thanks!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [17 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from msdarque
Review:
Wow... exciting and fun chapter! Liked reading it.
I think it was a very Xander-like response to the Hellsing Organisation and Alucard.
Eager to see how the fight goes and who ends up with the cross.
Congrats!
Review By [msdarque] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from HolyKnight
Review:
Oddly not. I'm more of a free thinker that often aids writers to the hour of creating valid plots for events or such. Oddly, i can think on that the "Slayer Spirit" its on a sense present on a low level on ALL Potentials. . .a sort of bridge for when the anterior Slayer bites the bullet. Keeping on the thought line of the presence of the Slayer Spirit on some level on a potential.

Would not act this Spirit like a parasitic seal on the Potential, draining and sealing the devil side of the girl, while keeping the Potential ready for its "Calling" as a Slayer.?

Why this never happened before? Think on the sheer odds of a Female Half-Devil or such being a potential, or the fact that until very recent modern ages, Half-breed Devils did tend to have a VERY limited life length, due to Iscariot and other zealot, demon-hating groups killing said children on the spot, regardless of things. To boot, i guess that given Nero, Dante and Vergil, the birth of female Half-Devils happens less frequently than guys, and there you have a more plausible way to explain WHY a Potential never showed signals of Devil Heritage.


PS: Its a little known fact, but i believe that Devils and Half-Devils actually do take offense to be called or compared to Demons, as Devils are on the high tier of power and capabilities, like comparing a man with an orangutan
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from kayron
Review:
More Irish than Jamaican? HAHAHA! That kind of struck me as funny. Glad to see that the story is still alive and kicking. I really thought that Xander would have identified himself by now. As for Sir Integra...I think she needs to be knocked off of her high horse every now and then.
Review By [kayron] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun confrontation between Xander and the Hellsing organization.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from moringstar
Review:
nice update can not wait to see were you go next from here. hope you update son of thunder soon. keep up the good work.
Review By [moringstar] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from HolyKnight
Review:
Sorry for the messed question. Let me repeat. What would happen with a Slayer, if she were to die by a demonic/devil weapon, and said Slayer ALSO was of Devil blood, even if only a quarter, she being unaware of it? She would just die, or the mix of the slayer spirit leaving would trigger a Devil Awakening?

It would be quite the odd factor with Kendra or Faith. .. Kendra being stabbed with a weapon that Spike stole from somewhere, only to bring her Devil blood into full awakening, and turning her from an Slayer, into an half-breed Devil...
Comments from author:
Hmm, interesting question...is this for a story your writing?

From what i have learned from the DMC games, for all intents and pruposes Devil heritage is awakened from birth, slowly taking hold of the indivual until they fully come into their power. That is the impression the as of yet to be released DmC game points to.

If we are going with the whims of an author than they could very well do what they like, though devil arms do not let anyone wield them, the user must subjugate the devil before their souls take form and bind themselves to the user.

I hope i made sense to you if not let me know since this is a rather interesting question.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from LFW
Review:
Good mix of BtVS, DMC and Hellsing.
I am amused by Xander mouthing off to Integra.
Looking forward to more
Thanks
Review By [LFW] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from HolyKnight
Review:
Hmm. . . question: What would happen to a female that its half, or less, Devil part, if she dies while being the slayer, Huh?
Comments from author:
I´m sorry but i don´t understand the question.
Review By [HolyKnight] • Date [28 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from ThunderGod
Review:
excellent story...cliffy at the end and its been a few months since you updated..you are evil!!!!...LOL...get around to it when ya can mate

Edit

For a neta...Greywizard if he aint swamped..he may well have great ideas for others
Comments from author:
Actually the chapter is ready however i am looking for a beta reader since my usual one is out for hardware issues. I´m currently looking for a temporary back up, can you recommend anyone?
Review By [ThunderGod] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from Netchka
Review:
Very good story. Hope to see more chapters soon. Thanks.
Review By [Netchka] • Date [30 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from jgoodman
Review:
Love this story and can't wait to read more
Review By [jgoodman] • Date [4 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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