Review of chapter "Chapter One" from djhardim
So far so good. One correction, Buffy killed Lothos before she came to Sunnydale.
The vampire she killed in Sunnydale was called The Master. According to Joss Whedon's script for the pilot, his real name was Heinrich Joseph Nest.
Comments from author:
Yeah, i knew that and i thought i removed it before publishing sorry about that
Review By [djhardim
] • Date [14 Mar 11] • Not Rated