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Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from shazamfan
Review:
Fantastic start. I've always dreamed about doing a Witchblade story myself, but not to up on the universe as I only had the first 12 issues and then a couple of recent trades to go by on knowledge of the universe. Looking forward to seeing what happens from here.

-J-
Review By [shazamfan] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from (Past Donor)wozwashi
Review:
Really cool idea. I would love to see where you take it. Personally I'd rather see Xander be a male wielder, but hey its your story.
Review By [(Past Donor)wozwashi] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from HeatherSin
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I think the old problems with "timing" aren't nearly as important anymore given how far we are from canon. I wouldn't worry too much about it.

Nice chapter length, nice characterizations. The plot has a good possibility of going epic since I haven't seen a really good Witchblade cross before. Most of the are just rehash of canon episodes which was old and cliche a decade ago. Now you just need a decent Grammar Nazi to look it over.

Good luck with future chapters.
Review By [HeatherSin] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from BarbarossaRotbart
Review:
Interesting beginning. I hope that Xander stays female after the spell ended.
Review By [BarbarossaRotbart] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from Tariq
Review:
Interesting start to a potentially very interesting story, especially since it looks like you're avoiding the usual gender switch route (thank you).

As for cell phones, mobiles were, if not wide spread then known at least in that time and so standard models for voice and text would not be out there at all. Camera phones and other more modern contrivances would not be all that out there (2004) and since this is fanfiction after all, you do have a great deal of latitude to alter the world as you see fit. Adding hover cars and computers in the brain might be pushing things a bit but for most they probably wouldn't realise that certain technologies weren't prevalent at the time of Buffy.
Review By [Tariq] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from lordamnesia
Review:
Very nice start. Xander with a Witchblade, don't see that to often, so I'm definitely looking forward to seeing where you end up taking this!
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from ladiciusevol
Review:
Interesting start, I look forward to seeing this continued.
Review By [ladiciusevol] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice fic here. Looking forward to see just where you'll take this. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balance Disrupted" from BuffySpear
Review:
interesting idea look forward to seeing where you go
Review By [BuffySpear] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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