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Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from SilverWave
Review:
Well that was good!

Cheers :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Mordare
Review:
As always I love your story. Great way to bring the Witchblade into the world. It does fit well with the Buffyverse. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Studyofchaos
Review:
Nice chapter. I like the WB tangent, keep Buffy guessing.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from AbscondingCascade
Review:
May I say how happy I am to see that this fic lives. It rocks! And so in thanks a little I found whilst browsing on youtube - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zoyiRis_-ds
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Orchamus
Review:
Blada blada blada, that's all I hear from Buffy's mouth. Seriously, get over the angst, stop being a necrophiliac, and stop bleaching your brains out. Gods girl! Anyway, nice history, that was rather well done. Rather interested in how Xander stacks against Old Ones and Hell gods now though.
Comments from author:
Keep in mind that Buffy has essentially a death sentence riding on her head all the time. Not only that but she can't really enjoy her life because her calling is incredibly dangerous, and if she doesn't do it others will most certainly die. Well, even more people will die. Anyway, the point is that she has reason to be angsty, not trying to justify her attitude, but she has cause.

Can't defend the necrophilia, or bleach. Not even going to try.

As for Old Ones and Hell Gods... Xander, or more accurately the Witchblade, has a certain facet of power, and it is useful, certainly, but only a small portion of what they are/were. Xander himself hasn't been powered up keep that in mind. He can be healed by the Witchblade, but he isn't any more durable than a normal human and significantly less than a Slayer like Buffy. He also still has those human limitations. He doesn't react faster or gain immediate fighting ability. He's going to have to work on that stuff the hard way. As it stands now Glory could kill him in five seconds, her speed and strength would assure that, her durability wouldn't factor into it.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from CageFire
Review:
Awesome new chapter. :) Keep up the great work, I hope to read another chapter soon. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from grd
Review:
Excellent job. Love this tale.
Review By [grd] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Dusel
Review:
Did you really have to have your OC rant on about the flaws of a given universe? Fucking hate that.
Review By [Dusel] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from war
Review:
Good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [war] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Alkeni
Review:
interesting...
Review By [Alkeni] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from LanceAvalon
Review:
It's good but the Golem thing seems, well pointless and stupid.
I'd think after the Xander's MPD phase she isn't thinking Xander can have a normal life.

It just seems like a gimmick to force artificial drama into the situation.

Also does the Witch Blade have all of the powers the comic version had?
Comments from author:
The Golem was something I put in not too long before sending it to my beta. It shouldn't have much of an impact on the story.

I'm going to presume that MPD is not Metropolitan Police Department. I'm not good with acronyms. A friend said it was probably Multiple Personality Disorder, so I'll go with that. Remember that Buffy wants Xander to have a normal life as possible, that means NOT piling more stuff on when he seems to be at a low point, as he is now, which is what she sees Syeira trying to do. Or worse trying to use Xander for something else.

The Witchblade has all the transformative powers the comic one had, armor, weapons, lock picks, etc. Energy blasts are possible, but dangerous and rather unpredictable. It cannot raise the dead as the comic one did a few times, nor grant visions of 'great trauma'. It does have other senses though and its method of communicating the strange things it perceives can be unusual. It can also grant visions from past wielders, but not all of them until every fragment of the Witchblade is recovered, a great many are there, but lots still aren't, so fragments of its history are unknown for the moment. Not set on the ability to touch incorporeal creatures yet, but I'm leaning towards yes.
Review By [LanceAvalon] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Balanced Work Out" from mlock
Review:
I like how this story is going. Update soon.
Review By [mlock] • Date [4 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Balanced Work Out" from DeaconKrow
Review:
Great story, I just found it. I like the way it built up. I was expecting the personalities to merge when the witch blade showed, but I was surprised at how quickly it came. Surprised in a good way that is. Hope to read more soon.
Review By [DeaconKrow] • Date [26 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Balanced Work Out" from Hanzo
Review:
fantastic
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [11 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Balanced Work Out" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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