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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from MountainWilliam
Review:
Can't help you out on whether your story is true to Criminal Minds, or not, as I've only seen bits and pieces of episodes in the series.

I can tell you that you have a helluva tale going here!

Bravo!!

More, please?
Review By [MountainWilliam] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Marcel
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Wow, this was an amazing start. I think the BAU voices are ok, but you got a perfect Dawn.
Review By [Marcel] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Taisy
Review:
Great start, I'm really interested from just this first chapter. I love Criminal Minds and I think you got their characterization down really well. I'm definitely looking forward to more.

Slight niggle: 2nd section, 11th para, 2nd word- An annalist is someone who chronicles yearly events; an analyst is someone who examines and sifts through information. I'm thinking you might mean that Garcia is the latter and not the former.

Thanks for the intriguing read.
Review By [Taisy] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kaleidofox
Review:
Oh, goodness!! I really love this story already!! There aren't many Criminal Minds/Buffy stories out there, and even fewer that are actually Buffy-centered. But even though this isn't quite Buffy-centered yet, I am still considering it that in my head...

But seriously, I love the plot you have going so far. Buffy is so going to be kicking some sexual sadist ass!

Can't wait for the next chapter!! And so far, I think you have the characters of criminal minds written well. I haven't seen enough to critique it anymore than that though.
Review By [Kaleidofox] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from littleoldme
Review:
I absolutely love this--and your voices for all of the characters, both CM and BtVS, are right on! More soon, I hope!
Review By [littleoldme] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Denae
Review:
Amazing job, can't wait to read more.
Review By [Denae] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ArjaiH
Review:
what you have is an excellent start...I will be looking forward to the next installment!
Review By [ArjaiH] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lotusja
Review:
NOooooooo!!!!! I hate cliff hangers. You are evil, I will say this again. EVIL!

Good Job. I am waiting in anticipation.
Review By [Lotusja] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from wintermoon
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Oooh this is so good!
I am on pins and needles waiting for the next chap!
Review By [wintermoon] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Havocseeker
Review:
an awesome start, there's not enough criminal minds crossovers as far a I'm concerned and this shows real promise...keep it up!
Review By [Havocseeker] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Lisette
Review:
*grins* So far, so, so good. I'm delighted to see you taking up a Criminal Minds/BtVS crossover - and later adding in NCIS sounds even more delightful. What a trifecta of goodness! Seriously though - with only a chapter down, you've already got me hooked in. I love how strong Dawn is in this. She's obviously grown up and out of her whiny, annoying little sister stage, but more importantly, I love how dedicated she was to the idea of her sister. Her last thought before unconsciousness was about Buffy being angry if she broke the number one rule, her drugged out first thought is that she won't be safe unless Buffy is there with her. And now, we finally have Buffy on the scene. I seriously can't wait to see how big sister reacts to what's been done to little sis. I imagine the shit is truly ready to hit the fan, and I eagerly look forward to how the team reacts to the strong, capable woman that they'll find in 5 foot nothing Buffy Summers.

Well done!
Review By [Lisette] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Past Donor)Pax
Review:
More more more!
I was totally into it and then it stopped and now what's a girl to do?
My interest is definitely engaged and I hope there's more coming soon as I can see this being an egrossing read.
Review By [(Past Donor)Pax] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Shawn
Review:
So far, a great start. I think you've got the CM characters spot on and I'm really enjoying your adult Dawn. I'm very much looking forward to the next chapters.

Thanks!

-Shawn
Review By [Shawn] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xovervore
Review:
An intriguing start. I am avidly looking forward to an update.
Review By [Xovervore] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from link
Review:
I really love what you have so far. Keep up the good work.
Review By [link] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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