I like it! Criminal Minds and BtVs combined can only result in good things. And to me, at least, you had Garcia down pat- she would've been so frustrated with the lack of sense the files were making! Keep it up please!
Review By [kittenpoker] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Ok this has some damned fine potential. I so want to see more of it. I love it already. All the characters seem to be done well. I can hardly wait to see Buffy's reaction. If this is a human criminal she is not going to be happy at all. If it is a demon or something it is so toast. Again well done.
Fire
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Definitely interested in where you're going to go with this. I enjoy both of the series that you're crossing with and seeing those two, plus Buffy, thrown into the same bag is going to be very intriguing.
Update soon, please.
Review By [angeluscado] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Not Rated
I like what you have so far. I can't reliably comment on the character voices due to never actually watching a full episode of Criminal Minds, yet I like how you've been portraying them so far.
Review By [queenskin] • Date [24 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Jez, just when I thought that I couldn't love you or your crossovers any more, you come out with this. YOU ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!! I can't wait till we find out just who the big bad is and how Buffy will react. And I can't wait till you reveal who Buffy's love interest is and from what 'verse they're from. I can't wait till the next chapter, so until then, may your muse visit soon and often.
Awesome! This is a fabulous start and I am desperately want to see where you go from here. Keep writing.
I just went back and re-read the chapter, so I'm now adding to my review as well. The one thing that I noticed the second time through was that, despite knowing that Dawn had been raped, the hospital had assigned a male nurse and Hotch and Morgan had not brought a female along to assist in the interview.
Still, the story is fabulous and I want to know what happened to Dawn, how she escaped, and how Buffy and the BAU are going to work together to track down the unsub. Keep writing.
Review By [MarbleGlove] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]