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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
OMG! Your little gem made me, wait for it, laugh my ass off. You are truly a sick and inspired author.

The only incident I can remember that even came close to poor Faith's problem was a friend of mine who squatted to relive himself out in the State of Washington woods and ran a small poison ivy plant up his ... ah ... rectum. Poor guy spent weeks in the hospital and was in terrible pain every time he ... ah ... you know. But of course we, his dearest friends and fellow soldiers, laughed our asses off whenever the subject was brought up. Human beings can be so cruel. Lol!

Yes, the REMPs really don't like 'heroes' being killed. Congresscritters get all upset and there are sometimes "inquires" which generate tons of paperwork. So, next stop the SGC?

Edit: I had a SGM who was a real Christian gentleman, even if he was about 6'9" and short for his build, and never swore or used 'naughty' words. So he never used 'rear eschelon mother f***er'. He always said 'rear eschelon motherless people' and I always found it amusing that such a large and dangerous man would use such bland language. I didn't even realize I'd flashbacked to my childhood when I wrote REMP instead of REMF. Lol!
Comments from author:
Yes I think if you've been in the services you've see something like this.

Buddy of mine always used to either fall into drainage ditches or get caught up on barbed wire fences when we were on patrol in NI. After a while we just used to leave him there. That's what I call friendship!

REMP's? Are these like REMF's?

SGC? Bit obvious don't you think?

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kremer
Review:
A definite thumbs-up for this addition.

Poor Faith - literally caught with her pants down. Wounded, even.

At least she can counter the jibes by asking if anyone else has ever singly taken out an entire insurgent ambush while mooning them at the same time. :)

Another PH, but do they still do clusters, or would she get yet another medal for that?

Also, it's a shame the U.S. still determines ground combat ability solely by chromosomes and biological plumbing.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

PH's and clusters; being English I only found out about the possibility of 'clusters' for addition PH's the morning before I posted this. I did think of changing it but I decided I'd stick with what I'd written until more information came along.

Women in Combat? Never bothered the Russians in WWII.

Dave.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Mcspender
Review:
And today's lesson is: Never, Never, Ever mess with Faith's... "private time" in the "bathroom", or you will see what (almost) Naked Fury Really Is =P.
Cool chapter, see ya!!.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

'Naked Fury', I like that!

Dave.
Review By [Mcspender] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from war
Review:
should be interesting to see what Faith chooses,also to see who comes to try to recruit her.

good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Bit more research to do and we'll see where Faith ends up.

Cheers,

Dave.
Review By [war] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
More. And that's an order, son.

General Blue (just in case you wonder who the ranking officer is!)

[smirks evilly]
Comments from author:
Sorry mate, I was a Trooper so I out-rank everyone!

More will most certainly be written, I've just gotta do one or two things first.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from yrfgd
Review:
OK, you can NOT leave this here. Or do I (hes says suspiciously) detect a subtle move of Faith to the SGC here???
Comments from author:
Don't worry it won't be left, definite plans are in the works.

SGC? Who knows?

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Cmiller
Review:
That was interesting and I think you should add more soon.
Comments from author:
Thanks.

More will be added to this series, but when I'm not sure, hopefully you'll not have too long to wait.

Dave.
Review By [Cmiller] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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