This is just a way way wonderful story. I love Dawns animal form it sounds way to cute the fact that you used Padfoot getting hurt for the two of them admitting that they loved each other is wonderful. I love that Harry has a little sister that he has already decided he was going to protect.

awesome, loved it, thanks.

The idea of Dawn at a loss for what to do with herself certainly works as a concept alone, and you explore her attempts to find her way in a very interesting manner; a dimensional ‘jump’ might be an extreme way of finding purpose, but you win points for originality, and it should be interesting to see how Harry’s relationships at school are affected by his stronger personality (Although I still hope that he ends up with Ginny in the end, if you’re taking votes; I just think that she was the best fit for him).

Very good

Excellent story. Looking forward to the continuation.

They made themselves into a real family. I like how their lives turned out.

Yes, Dawn, there's a perfect idea... let's ask The Powers Who Forgot to Use Lube. I'm sure nothing could possibly go wrong there.

Just picked up on this story. It is just as sweet as it is short. I hope you have enough encouragement to make a sequel!

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A serious haiku:

Dawn passed love making
Found love reflecting her warmth
Love for all your need

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Is this the first in a series? I only ask because I can see many things changing with a stable and balanced Harry Potter. And I wonder of the two worlds will ever cross paths again? Great fic as usual.

This was lovely. :) I'm looking forward to your novel re-writes. Hope your move went well!

Lovely story, really enjoyed it. Thank you very much

Aww, that was just adorable! Kinda short, but definitely a nice, cute epilogue. I am going to be greedy and hope for more in form of a sequel though :-)

I love that Dawn and Sirius had a little girl and I can just imagine how over-protective Harry's going to be of his younger sister in the future too =) Poor girl, but at least she's going to have a pretty awesome big brother, along some kick-ass parents!

Anyway, thanks for writing this wonderful and rather original story!!

That was sweet. Were you planning on doing a story about changes for Harry in his school time line?

Short but cute.

Short but cute.