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Review of chapter "Epilogue: May 18th, 1986" from MistofRainbows
Review:
Short but cute.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue: May 18th, 1986" from Raider
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I hope there's a part two, cause this was one hell of a ride!
Review By [Raider] • Date [5 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from LeaFairy
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I just finally got caught up on all 5 chapters I missed, and damn did a lot of stuff happen in those chapters! Holy crap! Dawn and Sirius got married! They fell in-love! Now they're pregnant and Harry's going to be a big brother! Fabulously awesome twists you've got there =)

I also love that Dawn and Sirius fought, and won against Only-I-know-what's-best-Dumbledore over keeping Harry (thank goodness). Dawn getting her own wand (great scene at Ollivanders by the way, I always did like the guy and he was very much in character here). Cool too that he had to make Dawn her own wand, with her own hair. Very neat. Dawn also kicked ass during her evaluation with Dumbledore and the others. She's a total badass witch she is! (lol) It's amazing that she learned all that in such a short period of time... Kinda reminds me of Hermione :-) I have a feeling that those two are going to get along rather well...

I have to admit, I had a total squeal over the Dawn/Snape scene a couple chapters back. He really is one of my most favorite HP characters (besides Hermione) and I just loved him and Dawn interacting together. You also did a wonderful job with him and his voice, he was perfectly in character. I just LOVE him and his snappishness!

The Dawn/Sirius building relationship was pretty well done too. I love how they both revealed their feelings for each other (Aw, they're both animagus') and that it all started with them getting married for a cover-story to keep Harry safe. I love that they're raising Harry in the muggle world as well. I like that he's going to still have that background when he finally goes to Hogwarts.

Thanks also for the little bit of reasoning on why Dawn spilled all her secrets (especially about being the Key) to Dumbledore and Co in the beginning.

Anyway, thanks so much for all the updates! I'm sorry for taking so long to read/review though. I was unfortunately without a computer/internet for over a month :( So again, thanks for writing, I really have enjoyed this story so far!!!

Edit:: Good luck on your move!!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [24 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Headquarters" from LeaFairy
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This story is coming along nicely! I've been constantly surprised by all your twist; especially with Dawn meeting up with Dumbledore and the Order. I thought maybe Dawn would raise Harry on her own till Hogwarts years, or maybe with Sirius if he managed to not get himself arrested, so I was pleasantly surprised by your twist.

I loved the little bit of Dawn/Remus interaction (very heartwarming and very much in-character for both) and of course the aggravation between Dawn and Sirius too. *grins*

I will admit I was also surprised with how open Dawn was with Dumbledore and the others. I really don't see her telling them all of her past, especially about the Key. To me at least, it would be a very secret and closely guarded subject for her. *shrugs* It's no big deal, it just threw me for a second when she confessed everything to Dumbles. It also could be because I'm not a big fan of Dumbles myself either :))

Anyway, wonderful job on this story so far, I really look forward to reading more! Thanks for the updates!!
Review By [LeaFairy] • Date [22 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from Addlcove
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like it so far, love the idea of harry being a big brother :)
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from Lyd
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They finally got together. And now Dawn is pregnant. You added a lot of complexity very fast. I love that Sirius tells her that he knew before they ever got married.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [13 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from MistofRainbows
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The chapter was nice, the age spread means that Harry will still be in school when the new one starts.. not too bad. Cute tiger form as well.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [13 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from Orion
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Great! Thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from VillageOrchid
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Enjoyed this chapter. Surprised that they waited three years. Wondering why she picked Devon - you know where the Coven is that Giles knows?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three and a Half Years Later" from Alastor
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Yay, finally some serious interaction with Sirius(I couldn't resist). It will definitely be interesting to see when Dawn confronts some Death Eaters, given her limitations and training she definitely seems more the type to just shoot one of the in the head than give them the chance to harm her and those she might care for. I would like to see her giving Sirius and Harry training into martial arts, since the DEs or any wand user can't really do much to a person if they can't hit them. Looking forward to more! Update soon!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from (Past Donor)Snag
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Hm. Intriguing enough that I'll track for a while and see how things develop. Fun stuff so far!
Review By [(Past Donor)Snag] • Date [10 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from Shishamo
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I really quite like the direction you seem to be going with this. It's pleasantly delicate, as if you're giving the story time to find itself and move forward naturally.
Review By [Shishamo] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from Lyd
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I really enjoy Sirius and Dawn together and I've never read a fic where they take care of Harry But this one is really original and I like the way it is going.
Review By [Lyd] • Date [10 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from HarmMarie
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Really loved the chapter.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from AllenPitt
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Dawn might be able to manage multiple animal transformations. She's the Key, so "Dawn" is in itself her, transformed. SO maybe she could learn to manipulate the "Dawn spell"?
Ok, so they raise Harry in Italy, so he's not aware of how famous he is in wizarding society; he'll be much the same when starting first year, minus the abusive Dursely stuff.
Maybe he'll have a little sister or brother who'll be a few years behind him?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
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