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Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from liferscove
Review:
great update.
Review By [liferscove] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
Review:
I'm loving this story so much. And I'm rooting for Dawn and Sirius to work out.
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from CadenceCascade
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I am really enjoying this story. I like that it's building slowly and I adore babyHarry. He'd have me wrapped around his wee little finger too.
Review By [CadenceCascade] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from AonGealach
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Great new chapter! I love the interaction between the new family. I want Dawn to become a animagus as well, it would be cool if she was a wolf or coyote or some such canine. I also would like to see Remus moving in with them maybe, or just living near them to be with his "family" instead of the lonely life he had in canon.
Review By [AonGealach] • Date [9 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Honeymoon" from VillageOrchid
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Good job at following through with Sirius being a hot head, jumping to conclusions. But they only have each other. So cool with the listen and learn. And cool with the hope that they could become a real relationship. It is reasonable.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from Addlcove
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Awesomely great so far, I hope we at least get a few chapters of "harry growing up" shenanigans before you throw everyone back into the wizarding world.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [3 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Christmas" from HarmMarie
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Loved this.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from (Past Donor)athenewolfe
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I was so hoping for sirius/ dawn pairing I think it will be brill. I love the idea of the two of them together and eventually hopefully happy and love. Great job so far on the story
Review By [(Past Donor)athenewolfe] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from VillageOrchid
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Time for Dawn, language expert with some knowledge of diverse cultures to back up the language knowledge, to review wizarding magic marriage contracts and rules about consummation. I can tell you're leading towards "she wouldn't mind" but it shouldn't be a surprise to her. Meanwhile, she might want to explain the muggle concept of "open marriage" so that they have the option of pursuing others should the reasonable opportunity occur. Lastly, if they do end up actually falling in love with each other, they should have the option for a second marriage ceremony with fidelity vows.

Lastly, I'd love to see them go somewhere tropical... at least regularly for vacations and have a surfing and sailing proficient Harry.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from Orion
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I'm very happy with this story so far. I like the idea of Dawn/Sirius, and I find the idea of her marrying him as part of a mission interesting. I am hopping you don't put them through too much angst before they realize they are good together.

Also I like that Dawn's in another world but is fairly open about what her world is like, it's an interesting shift from the more regularly used perspective the traveler needing to hide the differences in magic and vampires and such.

Thanks for writing!
Review By [Orion] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from Calendar
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I love this story so far. Dawn and Sirius' arguments and compromises are so good--I was wondering if all that chemistry was going to lead to a romance! I suppose it still might not, but I'm thinking that's definitely where you're leading. I approve! I think Dawn and Sirius make an amazing pair, and I'm looking forward to seeing how they raise Harry... and how quickly they fall head over heels.
Review By [Calendar] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Christmas" from AllenPitt
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Severus must be in bad shape, Voldemort went to the Potters on his info. Ouch. So they travel the world, hopefully do NOT settle in Sunnydale. So... will HP have a little brother or sister soon? Hee.
At least HP will have a much happier childhood.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from MistofRainbows
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I like that she physically tossed things at the defense teacher. :)

Be interesting to see where things go. I'll be curious to see if the world is actually the past or a different reality.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Christmas" from (Past Donor)KieriToews
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This is for the whole story so far: I found this to be really, really good. I actually found myself enjoying Dawn in this. She was- for the most part- what she was in canon (after 'The Key' energy/blood issue was finished)...a normal girl. Kudos on the story so far!
Review By [(Past Donor)KieriToews] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Christmas" from athenethegoddess
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Excellent so far, can't wait to read more!

~Athene
Review By [athenethegoddess] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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