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Review of chapter "A Month" from yakoba
Review:
neat story!
Review By [yakoba] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Month" from Alastor
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So Tonks has a younger brother? Interesting...the part with Remus was pretty good as well but if I remember right they didn't completely trust Remus during the war or something like that. I was also curious if you were making this straight time travel with a combined dimension, which wouldn't support the supposed Council library having no ward at all, or time travel to an alternate dimension. Looking good so far though, keep up the good work! Update soon!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Cool chapter! Thanks for continuing. When will Dawn discover that one of her two bank registrars is for Gringots, I wonder?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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I wonder if he was unable to find Wormtail or he found him and managed to not get caught after the frame-up.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from Orion
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Great! Thanks for the update. I'm not sure what's going to happen with Sirius and Wormtail, but it's obvious that the window for it to go exactly like canon has passed, so I look forward to seeing what you do with it.

As always, thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from AllenPitt
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Huh.... so maybe Dawn delayed Sirius just enough so he didn't find Peter? Instead was found by Dumbledore who got the story out of him, so Sirius didn't get blamed & packed off to Azkaban? Something like that? It'd explain the whole thing where people know about Harry's scar & the boy who lived thing, Sirius would be the only possible source for that info.
Being able to see the Leaky Cauldron is neat--she's a wand witch. And never got a letter because she was never 11 years old (that is funny). ie came into being at age 14 (I think that was her age, officially, at start of S6).
* If this is the same world, Dawn is going to be really tempted years later to interfere in Sunnydale events...maybe she can save Jenny Calendar or something. (imagine casting a Confundus so Angelus thinks he killed her, leaving a transfigured object looking like Jenny, so Jenny can then 'reappear' later on, to avoid damaging the timeline. Or something)
Meanwhile--I bet Dawn/Sirius raise Harry. She can get a wand of her own & learn magic. And turn out to have a 'magical core' of astonishing power...for a wand witch. Not enough to do magic directly like Willow but might be amazing with a wand.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from Addlcove
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looks great so far, looking forward to more.
Review By [Addlcove] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Month" from valdimarian
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There are a few exceptions you might want to make to the "The Buffy episodes will take place when they aired." Namely Halloween (which aired in November I think) and the Christmas episode in season 3 (which is oddly the first time The First Evil is shown). Now I can't think of any others, but I'm sure there's one or two that are tied to specific dates (like Christmas or Easter or whatever).
Review By [valdimarian] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Month" from cloudleonsgurl
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I like that she called Harry, Xander. And I really like that Remus was in the chapter, and you seem to be weaving a very eventful story. I can't wait to see what happens when they find out she has Harry. Will she blood adopt him to make sure he can stay with her and not go the Dursley though?
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from MistofRainbows
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Interesting turn of events for Dawn being stuck in another world/time. I'm hoping she buys the estate :) This is looking like an interesting story so far. Good to see that she got a bit of help starting out. I was 99% sure that Seamus was white though... and that Dean was the black kid, though maybe that's not the right Seamus. (either way there was a mistake in the line that included "women black women"

Over all great work so far.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from yuiop
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This sounds like it is going to be awesome once time speeds up!
Review By [yuiop] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Place" from Orion
Review:
Great! Thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from (Current Donor)RngrThorne
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Hmm, a very different concept here. I think I like it.
Review By [(Current Donor)RngrThorne] • Date [3 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from yrfgd
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Ok, this is an interesting way to get Dawn involved in Harry's world. It's certainly got a lot of possibilities.

Please keep going - looks good so far.
Review By [yrfgd] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from VillageOrchid
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Glad to see more of this. I am enjoying following along.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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