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Review of chapter "A Place" from AllenPitt
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I kind of hope it is in the past of her own world...that way "later on" she could re-meet them, but on better terms; wand-wielding powerful witch, all that stuff. Nice meeting with Seamus, too. Heh, if she'd raised the 'stick' she might have had the Night Bus show up instantly, that would have been funny. No wizarding money though.
At some point she might give it a wave, have it work? Finally find a way to tap into her magical core; might end up being very powerful... only problem now is she has no one to train her, might be kind of boring until HP's 11th birthday & the letter?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Place" from WolfWriter
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Hmmmm....intriguing, Dawn raising Harry. If only Sirius takes her words to heart, and doesnt end up in Azkaban.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from MistofRainbows
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Hey Sirius probably won't go off half crazy and get himself tossed in prison because he's got Dawn to keep track of.
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from Orion
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So far so great! Thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from AllenPitt
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hm... "I may..." ? know a safe place. So is this the same world/dimension Dawn grew up in, or another? If another, she won't know anything, I'd think. Yikes, so she & Harry wind up in a 'safe place', Sirius goes after Peter & winds up in Azkaban? Hm, HP would then NOT be "the boy who lived" ? he'd just be 'the kid who probably died with the other Potters'...?
I like Dawn picking up the wand. Next up--can she maybe use it?
The only potential down side to this story is, it's 10 years before interesting stuff starts happening again. Although she'd use that time to raise Harry and to learn wand-use, I suppose?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from cloudleonsgurl
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Chaos will soon follow, Dawn and Sirius 'escape' with baby Harry. Very, very good.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from KatieKat
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this story is great I'm loving it though would love more than these teasing chapters please.
Review By [KatieKat] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Exploration" from VillageOrchid
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I was able to follow along with this chapter, as I was not on the previous. An exciting choice. Dawn might not even be in her home dimension, and the readers are well aware that she's out of her time.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Exploration" from NutsContract
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YAYNESS!! COMPLETE CHANGE IN PLOTLINE!! I love it!! Update soon, please and thank you!!
Review By [NutsContract] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from CrystalBlaze
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Powers need a knee to the nuts, no shit.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from Orion
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Ohh . . . wow. Double wow even. I imagined several ways you might work cross these two . . . this was NOT one of them. Which is a good thing. Presuming this is going the way it might . . .

Anyway, great! Thanks for writing.
Review By [Orion] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from Raider
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nice.
Review By [Raider] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from Alastor
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Harry raised by Dawn? Now that sounds like it will be an interesting story, given these circumstances I still say that Sirius is the primary choice and this still leaves the story open for Harmony goodness, but then I always liked Hermione more than the non existant Ginny. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from AllenPitt
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It would be weird if she just picked up baby harry & ran with him... she'd have a tough time of it, no wand, no training, no identity in the 'muggle' world either. But if she's there when Sirius arrives, then Hagrid, she might have some 'splaining to do...
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Whiplash" from cloudleonsgurl
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Ah, so Dawn has been sent to when the Potters' died. Knew that she probably couldn't save them because of the prophecy, Moldywart had to mark Harry as equal. Good job. Can't wait to see what Dawn does and finds in the ruins of the Potter home. :)
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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