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A White Knight in Bayville

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Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from trongod
Review:
Liked it a lot; the essential Xander is there, and I especially liked the hat tip to Sir Doyle's best creation! The foreboding hint about the human/mutant conflict was good.

Really liked the part about Xander's lack of interest in Buffy as anything other than a friend and Angel's possibilities as a plague carrier... I wonder, does Xander cringe every time Buffy hugs him, or has he sufficient control not to flinch as she gets near him?
Review By [trongod] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from marcus
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An interesting start, I like that Xander is honest with himself in regards to his past. The two possible pairings you list will be fun to see regardless of which one you choose to use.
Review By [marcus] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from TheDon
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im interested. the summary leaves much to be desired and the first chapter didnt really tell me anything other than hes on a road trip and in bayville, the possible paths this story can take intrigues me. so you mam/sir have a reader for the next few chapters to come if only to see if my interest bears any fruit lol. hopefully you update this soon. until next time

-The Don
Review By [TheDon] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from TAO
Review:
Hmmm...a Xander/Mystique pairing or a Wanda/Xander pairing....

Well...either would work.

Having written a Xander/Mystique pairing (although I took a twisted funny approach to it), I wouldn't mind seeing someone try crazy Wanda and Xander. If anything, Xander could be a stabilizing influence on her (which would make her more unstable if something happened to him).


But either idea works for me.
Review By [TAO] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from xman
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Sounds interesting. But well Xander be a mutant and seeing as he took all Willow does later could that be part of his power?{Power sink} Girlfriend well that could be a toss up as he's a bit to honorable in some ways for them. Then again with his past possessions who knows what well happen. Hope to see more soon.
Review By [xman] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from chaostime
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I like the potential of this greatly. I hope to see more. I would love to see either pairings and the one not chosen as a sister figure.
Review By [chaostime] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from rothos
Review:
Continue dear writer,continue. Also consider this trackered.
Review By [rothos] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from ora
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I like it. It has a lot of potential. I'm thinking Wanda would be a better match. I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
Review By [ora] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from EroSlackerMicha
Review:
Continue it.
And for pairing I'd say Xander/Wanda (Wander?) with Mystique as a creepy stalker perhaps.
Review By [EroSlackerMicha] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from MathiasBlue
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Ooh you've gone and gotten me curious now....
And IMO (not that it changes anything) I think a Xander/Mystique pairing would be interesting. I don't think Xander and Wanda would work because while Xander may only just be entering adulthood, he's seen things that would age anyone.
Review By [MathiasBlue] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from DarthPayne
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Either Wanda or Mystique?

Why not both?

They could *both* use a white knight in their lives. :)

Though, if i had to choose one?

Mystique, due to being the saner of the two. And a favorite of mine. :)
Review By [DarthPayne] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from (Recent Donor)tammin
Review:
Interesting premise. I look forward to seeing where you will take this.
Review By [(Recent Donor)tammin] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from musiclover
Review:
good idea needs more
Review By [musiclover] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from lordamnesia
Review:
Not bad at all. Is Xander going to gain powers, or is he going to stay himself, the heart of the group, because the way you have it so far, hopefully the latter, because with a touch of training, a bit of magic weapon backup, and bam Xander can go toe to toe with a lot of the Marvel universe.
Review By [lordamnesia] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1 - Welcome to Bayville." from Darksnider
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Go for Mystique with Xander I'm sure you can have him give some ruthless insight with the killing and where it really needs to be done.

Wanda needs the Kurt fuzzy dude. ~_~ It's tradition
Review By [Darksnider] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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